Reviews for BRONZE
SianJohn chapter 23 . 4/27/2023
Just finished another reread of this fab story. Thank you for sharing your talents with us and leaving it here for us to enjoy time and time again.
Guest chapter 23 . 3/23/2023
I love it. Just finished another reread. Your story is refreshing and original. Thanks for keeping it out here for us, many years later.
Renee Aubin chapter 1 . 1/29/2023
I just finished reading BRONZE, and my head is still spinning. I've been reading Twific for (too many) years, and have known OF this story forever, but I finally picked it up from my TBR list.

I am so impressed! There are not many stories that have such a unique and smart premise, that is so meticulously thought through and executed. AND is a ripping good tale. AND has a wonderful Edward and a fascinating Bella (never thought I'd put those two words together).

My absolute favorite aspect was Bella's discipline of relentless, right-here-right-now mindfulness, as a way (it turns out) of avoiding triggering her power. It was wonderful to see how that looked in a variety of moments, and how Edward learned from it, albeit reluctantly.

Mothlights is also one of those writers who can put together a sentence that is so evocative and/or beautiful that it just makes you stop and catch your breath.

Bravo! Don't miss this one.
atouchofcitron chapter 23 . 7/20/2022
truly impeccable writing. i loved the shifting perspectives, bella's incredible backstory and ability, and the story in itself was gripping. thank you so much for this.
winterhorses chapter 19 . 6/3/2022
I’m so sad that the story’s almost over! :{
winterhorses chapter 13 . 6/3/2022
Reading again for the ?th time. I love this fic so hard. Bella is my hero.
SianJohn chapter 23 . 12/30/2021
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us.
KDMCAM chapter 23 . 12/11/2021
This was such a great story!
jaanavihairani chapter 7 . 10/23/2021
Edward throughout this book: Umm, Mommy. Sorry, mommy! Sorry, mommy? Sorry, Mommy.
TheFenrisWulf chapter 23 . 9/25/2021
What magnificent writing and a hidden gem, i loved this story, thank you so much
winterhorses chapter 23 . 8/26/2021
Le sigh. I love these two so much. I also love how you carried the object of the title through the story and brought the theme full circle at the end. Excellently done in every way.
winterhorses chapter 22 . 8/26/2021
Give her time, Edward. She’ll get there!
winterhorses chapter 21 . 8/26/2021
I love that Bella’s so bad-a$$!
winterhorses chapter 20 . 8/26/2021
Be patient Edward. She’ll take care of you.
winterhorses chapter 18 . 8/25/2021
This chapter is simply wonderful. All the feels and ends with a smile.
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