Reviews for BRONZE
cullengirl08 chapter 12 . 11/29/2010
I'm really hoping that Edward is okay and Bella is able to save him and get him away from the Volturi.
mysecretshame chapter 12 . 11/29/2010
Getting another chapter so soon is such a treat.

And this story never fails to impress. The suspense is killing me!

Love your Ginnie, by the way. With just a few brush strokes you've created a satisfying, complex character.

Prediction: once this completes, it's going to blow up into one of the biggest stories in the fandom. If people have any sense at all, that is...
tina062093 chapter 11 . 11/28/2010
I love the little Edward and Bella moments!
xxxbulletxxx chapter 11 . 11/28/2010
I'm thinking the Volturri are visiting him?
mysecretshame chapter 11 . 11/27/2010
Mesmerizing, as always. I'm guessing that this is a Volturi attack designed to free Bella of her obligations to "the newborn?" Excellent move.

And chapters every few days sounds like...the best Christmas present in my stocking.
Nyddi chapter 11 . 11/27/2010
Yay, Bella POV! I can't wait. I'm so excited about finally getting into that mysterious woman's head _

Can't wait for you next chapter, as always.
baynewen chapter 11 . 11/27/2010
Well up until the aborted phone call I would have said this chapter read like poetry it was calm, had depth and was sensually beautiful!

The comes the angst, and let me guess shape shifter, damn! Hopefully Bella will be there like a dog whisperer(sorry that was lame. But I seriously hope that there isn't any puppy love.

Your Bella is an sensual enigma and Edward is erotic mess great combo if these two ever get together they will probably set the forest afire.
fuz chapter 10 . 11/25/2010
I am breathless. This story isnt BRONZE, it is pure GOLD! Thank you.
baynewen chapter 10 . 11/22/2010
I LOVE these two they are both an enigma and a wonderful curiosity. Their ability to be attuned with each other emotionally is amazing and your playing it with such sensitivity and richness, it's BRILLIANT!
mysecretshame chapter 10 . 11/22/2010
Fantastic. Love the pacing, love the power dynamics, love the way you're thickening the plot. Fantastic story on every level. Every chapter.
why fiction chapter 9 . 11/19/2010
Generally, I'm not much into AU. But your story, so far, so, so good!

Original, well written and engaging. I'm really looking forward for more.

audreybrian chapter 8 . 11/17/2010
this story is sooo unique and interesting.. iwonder where it will go
Nyddi chapter 9 . 11/16/2010
God, I love this fic. More please. It was just getting good! (Wink wink)
baynewen chapter 9 . 11/15/2010
Love the sexy Edward! God that was so easy to visualize and the sense that Bella maybe letting her shield down was so palpable it was amazing. I could almost feel the sunshine and hear the water rushing along over the stones.

I am so in awe of anyone that use words to create such vivid scenes and such visceral emotions that you become not only entranced but you feel like your there watching from the periphery the proverbial "fly on the wall", it's magical!
Spunkie09 chapter 9 . 11/15/2010
Well that was interesting...wonder who is close by?
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