Reviews for BRONZE
brittany86 chapter 7 . 11/1/2010
very different but kool
Spunkie09 chapter 7 . 11/1/2010
I like Bat! Can't wait for more interaction between E&B
silverdust101 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
:) so cool
lovetwilight4ever chapter 7 . 11/1/2010
Continue the story../
baynewen chapter 7 . 11/1/2010
Bless you for Bat cause I'm ready to pull my hair out between Edward and Bella the silence is deafening between those two!

But I love the story and it's become so compelling I couldn't stop following it even if I wanted to!
xxxbulletxxx chapter 7 . 11/1/2010
I'd definitely get up on that roof and get as much out of that man as you can. I think it evens up the scale a little.
TwilightJemS chapter 7 . 11/1/2010
I like Bat! Hopefully he'll be dropping into the story from time to time?

Nyddi chapter 7 . 11/1/2010
Amazing, once again. Definitely love how this story's going so far :)
TwilightJemS chapter 5 . 10/29/2010
baynewen chapter 6 . 10/26/2010
Edward and Bella are both enigmas, just when I think I might be on the road to figuring them out you throw another twist in the mix, such as Edward calling here "Bella", and then the intimate nature of her intervention with Edward. You have create an ingenious puzzle here that wants unraveling, but you control the reveal in very diabolical fashion! I LOVE IT!
228 chapter 6 . 10/26/2010
I think later he'll be curious about the one who turned her.

Thank you for the update:)
iambananas chapter 6 . 10/26/2010
really good!

i can't wait for the next chapter!
TwilightJemS chapter 6 . 10/25/2010
xxxbulletxxx chapter 6 . 10/25/2010
Good chapter. I just don't get Bella. He can't touch her, barely talks to her and yet she can do whatever she wants to do. Doesn't seem fair. Then it seems like he doesn't always have control over himself because of her force. That would drive me crazy.
baynewen chapter 5 . 10/25/2010
You create such beautiful landscapes for the mind and fill them with the most viral and sensual characters!

I love your style and the flow of this story it's mesmerizing and hypnotic. I just get wrapped up in the chapter and then it ends. Each time I read one chapter and come to the end I feel like the last page has been ripped out of the book and I'll never know the such a tease and a genius can't wait for the next chapter.
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