Reviews for Moonlight Star
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 22 . 3/9/2012
Great chapter, please update soon.
Starrlight1812 chapter 22 . 3/9/2012
Not dead! Not allowed to be dead! I've just read this story from the beginning, now I like the idea, but you really need a beta to fix the grammar and spelling mistakes... It's not flowing as well as I'm sure it could. Otherwise great work, I look forward to your next post!

Taeniaea chapter 22 . 3/9/2012
Cool Story But AHHH it looks like there no hope left in less you have plan
Lady Frozen Rose chapter 22 . 3/8/2012
:O i was not expecting the way this chapter ended

wow and ummm, just curious, how strong is the spell Damien has Serena under?

looking forward to your next update and hoping it can be soon
Lover11Anime chapter 22 . 3/8/2012
:o :0 :o :0 !:o:o;o:o!

Wow...just simpily wow.

I can't believe that u had Damien or whatever the creeps name is STAB Darien TWICE not once but TWICE!

oh and do u mind puting a little more info about what happens between the creep and Serena in the next chapter and tell exactly what the hell happened 2 serena when he put that choker or necklace on her?
mangamania chapter 22 . 3/8/2012
i don't get it. is serena brainwashed or hypnotized? and what was the woman with the purple orb? i'm confused!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 21 . 3/3/2012
Love the atory, please update soon.
Lady Frozen Rose chapter 21 . 3/3/2012
your story just keeps getting better and omg! Damien, what an ass, looking forward to the next chapter and as for me, don't worry about not being able to update quickly, things take time and there's always things that can take away from free time, in my case it's college
Taeniaea chapter 21 . 3/3/2012
cool chapter
mangamania chapter 21 . 3/3/2012
e has to be blackmailing her! QQ TT I bet she's putting up w/ it and planning an escape when she sees Darien at the club. Tat is unless she's brainwashed.
Clove15 chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
Can't wait to read more.
mangamania chapter 20 . 12/4/2011
plz update again soon! i have a really bad feeling about serena. dark angel is giving me major foreshadowing and its nothing good.
miss vanillabean chapter 5 . 12/3/2011
the song bits are great ,but where exactly is this heading? and (no offense) but your punctuation is awful.
Princess Moonie of the Moon chapter 19 . 10/3/2011
Hey, I love your story, but I think the chapters are too short and you also really need to work on your. Spelling badly. I suggest getting a beta reader? Just so your sentences make a bit more sense as well as looking a bit more professional. :)
Taeniaea chapter 19 . 9/25/2011
cool story
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