Reviews for Let me love you
xxxKaixxx chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
Hey! I finally finished reading your fic!

I think the middle few chapters were awesome, with all the conflict and action going on. I just thought that the last 2 chapters were a little rushed. I would be great if you took your time to develop the plot more! )

But all in all, I enjoyed it! Great job!

Ohya, I like the language style you used in the fic... Though it seems different from your usual speech...
xxxKaixxx chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Wah! So sorry I hadn't come to read your fics till now but woO interesting! I'm only at the first chapter but I'll continue reading!

Anyway, I like how the story develops but perhaps you could add more description and details to make the text richer!

Well done!
Koyasumaq chapter 10 . 4/12/2011
buaaaa... thanks for your time and great job... i really loved your fanfic, i hope you want to write more... hey, what if we write one together? i'm not very good for this, and my english sucks but i'll do my best, what do you say?

kisses

Koyasumaq
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 10 . 4/12/2011
Aww that was sweet! Really cute, thanks for writing it
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 9 . 3/8/2011
Aww souji! Hijikata don't let him outta your sight from now on.
Koyasumaq chapter 9 . 3/8/2011
oonnneeee chaaaaappp? TTTTTmTTTTT sniiif sniif... whyyyy

but, i liked this one O now i just wanna know what will happen next, but that means the last chap so... my gosh! XD

don't worry Jen, just keep the story... your reader will se how survive XD... mmm... maybe a Tetsu-Suzu-Suzumu? (yayyyy!)

jijijiji i waaaaannntt mooooreeeeee *w*
Koyasumaq chapter 8 . 3/7/2011
w... whaaaattt? just three chaps more? nooooooo i wanna ten, or fifty!

oks, the chap... WUUUUUUUUJUUUUUU! YEAAAH THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT MAN! c'mon Toshi, we know we can so let's go (i know how Itou is, for that reason i love the "we go in couples" idea XD)

go on plz!
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 8 . 3/6/2011
Aww! Yay I'm so glad you updated, it's Been a while. Since you got a new computer does that mean you'll update soon?
XLightningX chapter 7 . 2/5/2011
Nice :).. I love this couple 3
Koyasumaq chapter 7 . 1/11/2011
PLEASE CONTINUE! PLEASE CONTINUE! PLEASE CONTINUE!

PLEASE CONTINUE! PLEASE CONTINUE! PLEASE CONTINUE!

ONEGAIIII
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 7 . 12/25/2010
aww the cuteness of it all i really like this story, its adorable
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 6 . 12/15/2010
eep! poor okita Hjikata you meaney!
Koyasumaq chapter 6 . 12/14/2010
arigato!

jeje... now Okita is mad... maaaaddd :3

jum! sexy! meee wanna know how Itou will die, i never liked Itou... HE'S A TRAITOR! KHEEELL HIIIMMMMMMMMMM

and Hijikata plz behave with Okita... arg... sometimes you are sooo stupid! come here, i'll teach you a little of my infamous "how to abuse your uke with love" ok? i'll waith you monday and friday at 8, don't be late! XD

and for you... CONTINUE PLZZ! :3
Koyasumaq chapter 5 . 12/13/2010
waaaaa... such a cute!

will you keep with the story? yes plz? plzzzz :3

it's amazing!
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 5 . 11/22/2010
aww super cute, 1 thing tho, get a new beta, a beta is meant to fix mistakes and edit a story to perfect it but theres a ton in this chapter. also ahahaha is a laughing sound not a moan. but i really enjoy this plot its great but i really think your beta is letting you down
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