Reviews for Twenty Seconds to Regret
Whirlwind421 chapter 6 . 2/14/2011
Youtch! It took them twenty years to make amends. Good ending though.
hifield chapter 6 . 2/2/2011
I'M a sucker for those happily ever after endings! So good to see them reconcile ... still trying to wrap my mind around John's added weight and loss of hair ... nice touch! lol

Enjoyed seeing the McKay's grow and age together.
hifield chapter 5 . 2/2/2011
Wow... hard turn of events. Can't imagine Atlantis without Jennifer and Rodney. But it's good to see that the baby is born and doing well. It'd be nice to see the rift between the friends mended.
hifield chapter 4 . 2/2/2011
Good to see they're working through the estrangement - Rodney's talk with the baby is very endearing.

On to the next chapter.
Senrab Nomis chapter 6 . 2/2/2011
Nice to see the two can start anew. Still its a shame that they lost eighteen years, John and Rodney were always such a great team.

Good story, nice epilogue.
hifield chapter 3 . 2/1/2011
I imagine that was quite a shock to see John show up with a broken nose. Seems like there may be a glimmer of hope.
hifield chapter 2 . 2/1/2011
Very intense! It's so hard to see them all fall apart!
hifield chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Really emotional chapter and so sad for both of them. Wish I could read faster!
Shadows-of-Realm chapter 6 . 2/1/2011
Loved the ending! Glad to see that they are finally moving on.

Great to be with you to finish another story!
puorla chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
Oh my, I really hope there is gonna be a happy end.
Shadows-of-Realm chapter 5 . 1/13/2011
I'm sure there are other reasons... *COUGH* John...
Whirlwind421 chapter 5 . 1/12/2011
Oh dear! (In reference to Rodney and Jennifer baby being born early.) Poor John! Good story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Shadows-of-Realm chapter 4 . 11/3/2010
I liked the conversation and I thought it was good that you were trying to reconcile them!

Keep up the good work!
Whirlwind421 chapter 4 . 11/2/2010
Awwwwwwww! That's was so sweet! Yay! Awesome!
LostWarrior101 chapter 4 . 11/2/2010
Ch. 3 and 4 review

Well I loved it. John walking in bloody nosed was practically priceless. Rodney getting back all lovey dovey is AWSOME. Cant wait for more... Wait I can. :) But plz hurry
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