Reviews for The Very Last Day
skadoo chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Sweet. Thanks.
I especialy liked the lines "But I can't think, I can't move, I can't breathe. And I can't leave..."
SilverWolf77 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Loved it!

"Starfleet is never going to believe this"

had to be my favorite part(:

Great Job!

USSVoy-NCC-74656 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
That was so freakin' cute. Oh my gosh :) You did an awesome job! keep writing you've got talent!
TheJesser chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Oh, I am a fan. This was so good.

"When...when I'm with you." and "I don't want to let go" *sigh* so cute. Thanks for sharing. )
polomare chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Love It!
Pookyilicous chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Loved it :D

fantastic :D

Pooky xxx
stampensue chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
I liked it very much. Good job.
badmelk chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Oh how I would have loved the episode to end like that! great story thank you for posting it :)
E. Taylor chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Ohhhh, that was wonderful! Such a sweet story. Excellent job. :)
Nynaeve506 chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Beautiful. I live Chakotay's internal dialogue and his determination not to let her hide and I love her courage to finally admit what she wants. :)
Anne chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Thank you for your story. I just watched that episode, for the first time, today! Perfect timing. I have enjoyed all of your stories.
chuckchuckchuck chapter 1 . 10/11/2010 was amazing! i love your writing flows very well and i could feel the emotional parts you were conveying to was fantastic...i hope you write another one soon...
mab13j chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
LynnEGib chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I always hoped Starfleet would understand!
JackieJacks chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
*happy sigh* This is just glorious, fabulous awesomeness. You write emotion SO well. It makes me unbelievably happy.

"You're still holding my hand," I repeat. "You've been trying to tell me that we can't be together on Voyager, that we can't be together while we're in the Delta Quadrant. You have every protocol and every reason planned out in your head like a defense lawyer. But you're still holding my hand."

Love love love love love it. Super well done :).