Reviews for The Very Last Day
koolio19 chapter 1 . 1/17
I love it, and I love that line "Starfleet is never going to believe this." I have thought that so many times through out the series. Great work!
skadoo chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Sweet. Thanks.
I especialy liked the lines "But I can't think, I can't move, I can't breathe. And I can't leave..."
SilverWolf77 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Loved it!

"Starfleet is never going to believe this"



had to be my favorite part(:

Great Job!

-silverwolf-
USSVoy-NCC-74656 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
That was so freakin' cute. Oh my gosh :) You did an awesome job! keep writing you've got talent!
TheJesser chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Oh, I am a fan. This was so good.

"When...when I'm with you." and "I don't want to let go" *sigh* so cute. Thanks for sharing. )
polomare chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Love It!
Pookyilicous chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Loved it :D

fantastic :D

Pooky xxx
stampensue chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
I liked it very much. Good job.
badmelk chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Oh how I would have loved the episode to end like that! great story thank you for posting it :)
E. Taylor chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Ohhhh, that was wonderful! Such a sweet story. Excellent job. :)
Nynaeve506 chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Beautiful. I live Chakotay's internal dialogue and his determination not to let her hide and I love her courage to finally admit what she wants. :)
Anne chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Thank you for your story. I just watched that episode, for the first time, today! Perfect timing. I have enjoyed all of your stories.
chuckchuckchuck chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
wow...wow...that was amazing! i love your writing style..it flows very well and i could feel the emotional parts you were conveying to us...it was fantastic...i hope you write another one soon...
mab13j chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
!
LynnEGib chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I always hoped Starfleet would understand!
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