|Reviews for je te rends ton amour|
| Sirens-Are-Singing-Your-Song chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
This was a good chapter. Carlisle and Esme were very convincing. I'm sorry but am I the only one who thinks that Renee actually did abandon Bella in a sense?
| aquarius127 chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
Thanks for another chapter, everything seems to be written well and with great thought.I can't wait until the next chapter when they're in Seattle. Until the next chapter...
| ShiroFlake chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
Awesome job !
Please hurry up with next chapter.
| Fridizh chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
Yet another lovely update! This was oh so very good, Bella's love for Esme really showed here. And Esme's love for her children came out strong too.
Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to see what happens now, now that Bella will be going with them to Seattle!
| boozemoose chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
You did it! And guess what? It's working just fine! Congratulations, my dear!
Again, you've done a well-written, convincing job. I enjoyed every line, and I felt sooooo there.
Let me quote some of my favorite lines - which I like for obvious reasons… ;)
I heard Esme's car engine several blocks away from the house. She was driving a BMW, identical to Carlisle's except that it was a coupé, and that she was driving about as fast as I would have been.
"Not at all, though I am afraid I have been speeding a little."
"However, she wanted to remain in Seattle to consider the University of Washington and their Asian Languages department, for their Japanese studies."
Now, why do these parts sound sooo familiar to me?
I'd also like to praise your description of Esme. It was really wonderful! I too would fall for this lady in an instant… er… wait… *scratches head*
Anyway… I'm glad you brought her in already, because it just makes sense, her being the "übermother" and all…
I'm glad I could provide you with some inspiration regarding her and her scent. And I really, really, really need to try this tarte tatin thing one day! ;)
Thank you for another great update, again!
| rosebella5903 chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
this is a very good story i love your writing style.
| JackyKay chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
Yay! You've updated! I am so happy, I feel like it's been forever when it's merely been days. I guess I am just impatient like that. ;) Well this update was great, as usual. I'm kind of glad that Renee is not putting up too much of a fight, because while I dislike her, I really don't want to hate her. She is so dismissive and cruel towards Charlie, it's already so bad. I don't think the relationship between Charlie and his daughter is that bad though. I can honestly say I have probably a very similar relationship wit my dad. Teenage girls don't know how to talk to their dads, much less when it's a single dad who went from being a bachelor to a teenage girls father, like that. I have such a respect for him and his character. Giving Rosalie the option as well as asking her if the responsibility is what she wanted was a very respectful thing to do. Also I still have to compliment your very mature speech. I don't know what it is but just the fact that both you and 'phfina write so elegantly, it just makes me so much more interested. It's kind of like "wow, they seem so smart and mature, they would definitely write something amazing". I can honestly think of know better way to phrase it. It's just amazing. :) Please post again soon, I can't wait to see what happens. Or read, I think. I can't seem to get that right. Till then...
| Avarenda chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
Well, at least Bella has a bit of good ol Esme love to help sooth her pain. I imagine an Esme hug would feel just as good as Rose described it.
| watching-quietly chapter 7 . 10/30/2010
Okay, first I'd like to say I'm sorry. I feel really bad for not contributing some kind of input. I was gonna do it eventualllyyyy .
Any whoots. I happen to like the story all together so far. I like the way Rose is kinda in denial (?) for the reason as to why she went back and actually stayed with Bella, but that's just me. It sounds like she's trying to convince herself or trying to justify it by saying it's a pride thing.
So there you have it. d(w)b
| Ravenscircle chapter 7 . 10/27/2010
I really need to make it to Europe within the next year. I feel like I’m missing out on so much. Your description is lovely.
“The fear will only be as big as what you fuel it to be." If only we could remember this when it really matters.
Aha, it’s nice to know Bella feels something for Rosalie even if she doesn’t understand it yet.
There is something so intimate about being bathed by another person. It is a place of such vulnerability.
I snickered a bit at Bella’s defiance and Rosalie’s reaction to it. It is odd but oh so right that two individuals that are so very different from each other, have met their match.
| lamni chapter 7 . 10/27/2010
Wow, the update was fast!
good for the readers D
The shower scene had a lot of sexual tension and i was surprised Rosalie maintained herself so 'professional' the whole time.
And i felt embarassed for Bella, poor Bella, i find her so adorable.
I almost gave up doing my marketing work to read this, glad i finished it fast enough to read the chapter today )
Thanks for sharing
| foundmymuse chapter 7 . 10/27/2010
Rosalie contemplating taking Bella against the wall and wiping that look off her face was hot as hell... keep up the good work !
| Sirens-Are-Singing-Your-Song chapter 7 . 10/27/2010
I really do enjoy this story.
| boozemoose chapter 7 . 10/27/2010
I don't understand why you're always so nervous about your updates - well, I kinda do, but really, baby, you have no reason to be!
I enjoyed this chapter very much. The whole bathroom scene was wonderfully described, I liked the subtle tension.
"Do you need to use the restroom?" - Rosalie is always so classy and correct! LOL.
Good thing she's always so in control. Not sure if I could've braced myself handling Bella as she did…
Another favorite moment of mine in this chapter is the part about the Swan clan's fragrances. (I could perfectly picture your Provence reference!) Fragrances… yeah… very nice! *smirks*
I'm really curious about the upcoming talk now. It's going to be fine, baby, so don't get too worked up about it!
| rosebella5903 chapter 7 . 10/27/2010
this is an amazing story.
your an awesome author.
i hope you updat again soon.