|Reviews for On The Exhale|
| GODISAWESOME chapter 24 . 2/26
I love love loved this story!
I wish this is what actually happened in the tv show!
I think you nailed the characters perfectly and I love the changes you made!
| SugarQuills10 chapter 1 . 2/14
This was wonderful and oh so cute! I was half worried you'll have Lana as a villain.
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 24 . 9/2/2017
| fallink99 chapter 24 . 1/3/2017
I was a little late with watching Smallville but recently binge watched all seasons on Hulu. I was thrilled to find some fan fiction dedicated to the show. Loved your story! I like the fluff in the later chapters. We never really got to see that much on the actual show so it's nice to be able to read a story that includes it. Thanks for all of your hard work writing this story!
| tamara.marquesdesouza.5 chapter 24 . 11/25/2016
ameiiiiiiiiiiiii lindaaaa ameiiiii
| tamara.marquesdesouza.5 chapter 19 . 11/24/2016
ameiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii mas cade a agarração d clois amoooooooooooo
| tamara.marquesdesouza.5 chapter 18 . 11/24/2016
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ameiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii cap perfeiitooo
| tamara.marquesdesouza.5 chapter 17 . 11/24/2016
| tamara.marquesdesouza.5 chapter 9 . 11/23/2016
não tem como ficar decepcionado com isooo amooooooooooooooooo clois aos pucos mas ta acontecendoooo
| tamara.marquesdesouza.5 chapter 8 . 11/23/2016
com certeza seria o melhor dia d vida dele com certeza a melho decisão d vida d clark
| tamara.marquesdesouza.5 chapter 6 . 11/23/2016
eu amoooooo o lois ela sabe plenamente como o clark é amoooooooooo
| Star Iron chapter 24 . 1/28/2015
Are you done with Smallville?
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/30/2014
Clark always was a complete COWARD when it came to dealing with the ladies.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Didn't particulary care for the way the show handled the whole Doomsday story. The whole Davis/Chloe deal kind of left a bad taste in my mouth, never really looked at Chloe's character the same way after that.
| 1eclecticreader chapter 24 . 7/25/2013
That was fantastic! Thank you for such a wonderful story.