Reviews for A FairyTale
john owens chapter 12 . 57m
I like this so much
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24
clarrisse is not a queen! She is a dowager princess!
twlightbella chapter 12 . 5/12
Their married
twlightbella chapter 10 . 5/12
Aww
twlightbella chapter 2 . 5/12
They told the family
twlightbella chapter 1 . 5/12
Michael proposed to mia
Shue Berta chapter 13 . 3/24
Very nice, I love Mia/Michael . Please share some more such stories ! I love it !
emily chapter 8 . 3/3/2015
Can't wait to read the rest
Emily chapter 2 . 3/3/2015
Great so far
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
Your grammar needs work but I like the ideas behind the story
Angela chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
It is hard to follow your writing due to lack of proper punctuation and incomplete sentences. Otherwise, it is a charming story from what I could glean...
Hello there chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
Good idea but please review for ommited words and other gramatical/spelling errors.
Lisa Cooper chapter 13 . 12/3/2012
Actually, I liked how you ended "A Fairy Tale" with a simple action and A sentence. It was very sufficient for the situation. Thank you for your story. L.
Lisa Cooper chapter 12 . 12/3/2012
Thank you for writting about Michael and Mia's actual wedding ceremony. You did just fine; the scene you wrote had the necessary feeling and solemnity of a wedding. Best of luck to you. L.
Feelthelovetonight5344 chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
I love the idea of the story but you really need a beta you keep missing out important words so the story does not make sense its so Infuriating! Sorry for being harsh i am just a really criticising person :D x
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