|Reviews for Staying|
| sfbxfcb chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
| Insideavoice chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Gotta love that kid, Jabbar. He's a super fine stud :)
This is sweet. Thanks for writin'
| lonelyxxbrokenxxwings chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I like your style here, and the semi-slow buildup. One suggestion is to make check the ending, the resolution seemed a bit rushed. But overall, this was very good.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
| ShelleyBarnard chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Very nice. Absolutely true to the characters. Thanks for sharing!