I liked the story & how they got out of the spell.
I would, however, like more of Damon & Elena getting together & her getting rid of Stefan.
This ending, the way you have it, isn't conclusive enough.
Write a sequel, with Elena ending it with Stefan & moving in somewhere with Damon & a nice, smutty Delena happy ever after.

This was awesome, so full of suspense and so funny on other parts. Was really disappointed that it had to end would have loved to have read what happened next.

Probably the best and scariest Delena story I've read

great all together amazing book had me at the egde of my seat

I really enjoyed reading that. So maybe it was a little clichè at points, but overall it was really great. You wrote Damon excellently, but what I was even more impressed with was that you wrote Elena excellently too. I've been reading rather a lot of fics in the last few days, and for some reason that seems to be a rare feat. I think because she's so inconsistent in the canon. But almost everything she said and did in this story were very much something I could imagine her actually doing. So many kudos to you for that.

Very nice fic. :)

That was awesome. Love all the angst. For a moment I thought you were playing with us and Damon just made her dream that they had left the house. Who knows, maybe you did :)

Why is this suddenly making me hate Delena? I love their chemistry and attraction, but I feel like they got together way too quickly. And with Stefan in the picture too :(

Wait whatttt
Elena, what about Stefan? o
Yeah, Elena has feelings for Damon but she didn't have to practically have sex with him..
I feel bad for Stefan... why elena whyy
AND OMIGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED TO ELENA
It keeps getting more and more exciting doesn't it?

This probably the most accurate and interesting Damon x Elena fanfic I've ever read. And I really mean that.

I like where this is going :) You got all the character spot on

Loving it so far :) The little Grinch charades bit had me laughing pretty hard. On to the next chapter!

This is just like one of those Netflix shows you can't stop watching and only stop watching because you watched all the episodes!

I am super engrossed in this... I am just on Chapter 4! I love this... This is the kind of Fanfiction I like... This seems like it should be a novel... :)

I absolutely loved this story
I even had to turn the light on lol

Wow I'm in bed reading this chapter now and it's actually freaking me out, concidering it's you know night time hence darkness,
Ha I'm seriously am freaking out though
Really.
I guess that means good job then