Reviews for Lockdown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love the idea of this story and can't wait to read more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo, I'm liking this! I like how Damon broke her fall and how he was using some creative swear words, lmao. And then the charades with stefan? Classic, lol. Really great job so far! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() Loved it :D BEST PART EVER LOL: "Trying to play charades with my brother. He's no fun though. I already guessed what he's acting out: Dr. Seuss' The Grinch who stole Christmas, but he won't break character. Don't get me wrong, he's got the disapproving, angry look down to a tee and even added a sixth wrinkle to his brooding forehead, so really, the resemblance is uncanny, but it's my turn now and he insists on being the Grinch the whole time. I don't think he gets the rules." HAHAHAHA you are genius! LOL :D:D:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw i love it plz keep updating!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! PLEASE CONTINUE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how witty and funny Damon is in this fic! You've got a devoted reader out of me, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please please continue! I really love Damon's character. And the Grinch sequence? Best part of the entire damn story. I almost cried I was laughing so hard :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your plot. I hope there's some really bizarre way to break the spell and make elena uncomfortable :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great characterization! Really like the idea and can't wait to see what you do with them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, please continue! I loved the interaction between Damon and Elena. Please continue |
![]() ![]() I LOVED IT! i really like the idea of damon and elena lockdown together, good job! please continue it as soon as possible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() pleases continue! but if it's ok can you change the rating level to T so that you could put more mature...stuff... in there (i know im such a perv P) |
![]() ![]() I love it, the dialogue is really good and it captures the whole Damon and Elena relationship really well. I like the whole stuck-in-the-house spell, its a nice new take and I think you have inserted your story into the right time frame as you get to play on Elena's anger aswell. It would have been nice if you could have linked the spell into the overall vampire dairies plotline rather than as something Elena accidentally set off with her snooping. I thought it was great and I can't wait for more. |