Reviews for Lovegame
CCTINACTIVE chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
This is great. I just wish Mello had kept the boots on...O.o
n0t1nuse chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I liked it~ Well-written and pretty darn good for your first time writing sex. XD
IkimonoNoNoru chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
And what, pray tell, do you find 'shittastic' about this? I only ever read and write hardcore yaoi scenes like this, and yours is one of the best yet. It's descriptive, and your spelling and grammar is damn near perfect. Keep doing it like this, and you're set. 3
Darkfire359 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
This is a pretty good lemon for your first time. But I would prefer some plot of some kind, even if it is just setting the scene.
La Renga chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Never written this kind of story before?

I quite didnt spected that! It was so good! Even more I thought you have already written because it was such a pleasure to reaad it! Seriously,

Really hot actually, So pleeeeaaaaaaase keep writting I like your style, you are pretty talented