Reviews for Untouchable
visionxofxme chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I like the short simplicity of this but, and this is not meant to be harsh, I feel that it could be better. Instead of telling us what happened, show us. I struggle with this too but have been working on it.

But! Your story here, in a way, has inspired me to try and write a Mike & Molly fic. I love the show and Melissa!

Good drabble, though.
ZoeandDan2gether4ever chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
I enjoyed this litte fic immensely. You've really captured the characters well. Like you, I was also suprised at how much I love this show and how fast I fell in love with it. I fell in love with Mike and Molly as fast as they had fallen in love with each other. Well done! **Alerts and favorites**
sfbxfcb chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
So sweet!