Reviews for Draw!
Taechunsa chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I loved this story. It was well written and moved at a good pace. I also love these slice of life views into Ron and Kim's life. They aren't always on missions after all.

Keep up the good work.
Reader101w chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Nice story,

Good Ron POV, although it is hard to imagine him a high school graduate from this story, also Joss could pass as somewhat younger.

The idea is funny though, and Ron's imagination runs vividly here.

keep up the good writing,

laranzu chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Good characterisation, interesting setting, lots of fun! Thanks
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Great horny toads!

A guy hasn't got a chance with that family!

Anythings possible for a Possible? Yea like being a turncoat.

Fun story, fun read.

I know you said you're taking a bit of a break, but with what you've been putting out in such a short span, I hope the break isn't too long.

Thanks for the story, I was guessing they'd be about five years younger, but this worked out better.
Robert Teague chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Nicely done, as usual! Pretty darn funny, as well.

As far as your writing break goes, I'll believe it when I see it. : )
Katsumara chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Ha. Nice work here, DP! Wranglin' Ron, eh? I had a feeling it was just some roleplay as I read through it and sure looks like I was right. Still a very enjoyable read. Keep up the great work!
CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Nice one shot of a moment of free spirit and contemplation.

Never be normal indeed.

screaming phoenix chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
This was sweet and completely in character for everyone! Well Done!
Slipgate chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
I reckon you'll be back 'fore you know it. This was a good read I tell you wut.
AmericanGecko chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Very nice, and very much in character. I'd say your experiment is without question a success.

Keep up the good work. :)

Earl Allison chapter 1 . 10/12/2010

Oh, that was adorable, especially the bit at the end with Kim and the water pistol. Simply adorable!

Thanks so much for the smile :)

Take it and run,
LoPe21 chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Pretty cute and a fun and interesting read.

I like the whole western feel and the end was pure ron-ness at its best.

Though the little expanded universe merits an expansion and true plotline.

Great work.