|Reviews for Draw!|
| Taechunsa chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I loved this story. It was well written and moved at a good pace. I also love these slice of life views into Ron and Kim's life. They aren't always on missions after all.
Keep up the good work.
| Reader101w chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Good Ron POV, although it is hard to imagine him a high school graduate from this story, also Joss could pass as somewhat younger.
The idea is funny though, and Ron's imagination runs vividly here.
keep up the good writing,
| laranzu chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Good characterisation, interesting setting, lots of fun! Thanks
| Joe Stoppinghem chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Great horny toads!
A guy hasn't got a chance with that family!
Anythings possible for a Possible? Yea like being a turncoat.
Fun story, fun read.
I know you said you're taking a bit of a break, but with what you've been putting out in such a short span, I hope the break isn't too long.
Thanks for the story, I was guessing they'd be about five years younger, but this worked out better.
| Robert Teague chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Nicely done, as usual! Pretty darn funny, as well.
As far as your writing break goes, I'll believe it when I see it. : )
| Katsumara chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Ha. Nice work here, DP! Wranglin' Ron, eh? I had a feeling it was just some roleplay as I read through it and sure looks like I was right. Still a very enjoyable read. Keep up the great work!
| CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Nice one shot of a moment of free spirit and contemplation.
Never be normal indeed.
| screaming phoenix chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
This was sweet and completely in character for everyone! Well Done!
| Slipgate chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
I reckon you'll be back 'fore you know it. This was a good read I tell you wut.
| AmericanGecko chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Very nice, and very much in character. I'd say your experiment is without question a success.
Keep up the good work. :)
| Earl Allison chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Oh, that was adorable, especially the bit at the end with Kim and the water pistol. Simply adorable!
Thanks so much for the smile :)
Take it and run,
| LoPe21 chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Pretty cute and a fun and interesting read.
I like the whole western feel and the end was pure ron-ness at its best.
Though the little expanded universe merits an expansion and true plotline.