Reviews for Entreat
blackkitty95 chapter 1 . 10/21/2016
Sensual and nightmarish (as pretty much everything I've read from you). I especially liked how you wrote Sebastian in this one. And I loved the use of sweet words (such as "candy-scented mouth") and the mention of sweets ("saccharine streaks of raspberry jam") in a story so dark, twisted, animalistic. Yet another fav!

Also, I think I'm into blood!porn now. Oops.
Dawn on fire chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Very sensual, made me squirm just reading. Nice touch on how Sebastian is caring but manipulative and so very demonic. Brought out by his admiration of the blood splatter.
xxPrtlyCldyxx chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Oh WOW. Seriously amazing fanfic you have here.
Cannibals Welcome chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Something about the stories you write ride the very thin line between nightmarish, will never leave your mind, stomach emptying horror - and animalistic, yet achingly tender sex... Even if that sex doesn't actually occur if you want to be technical.
Autumnrainingleaves chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
You seem to write horror, gore, well. Don't down yourself! Is it bad I can actually imagine Ciel like this when he becomes a demon? I hope not.
JotunJane chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Oh wow, that was horrid and so so sexy! I love you!

*******
JotunJane
BloodColoredRose chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
*nosebleed*

wow. this is so dark...yet so...seductive. i love it. you really have a way with words, don't you? this piece isn't just amazing. it's luscious. succulent. scrumptious.

it's a stroke of brilliance.

*sighs contentedly*
L chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
this is a work of genious, purely wonderful! I love it! It's so... disturbing, that is right up my alley. Amazing!
1628717 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
This is great!

I just wanted to point out that "neigh, willingness" part in your story, I was so engrossed and that one little word broke the flow. Made me imagine Sebastian as a horse, heh.
MargeryDoe chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Ah, I loved your ending. Corresponded very well with your beginning. Left me feeling full ;) in my thoughts. Plus, your Sebastian was deliciously clever, so I thoroughly enjoyed your dialogue. Your description had a special something to it, so I enjoyed your choice of wording. It was well-done. (:
promocat chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
sebastian is soo evil! (in a good way)
lizoftheinfinite chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
This blew my mind. The writing is insanely good. Adjectives and verbs galore without being purple prose. Subtle hints of SebaCiel overshadowed by Ciel's demonic desires. The way you tied together the whole oneshot with the first and last lines. Ooh, I loved this a lot. So IC, so canonical. Yayness. :D

-liz out
Spiegel chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
It was great to read something that suggests Ciel and Sebastian will develop an interesting (and wonderfully creepy) dynamic after the finale.
Gloomy Gloo chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
I love love LOVE this story; and I love you even more for your brilliant writing style. I've been reading some of your stories today and I think you're an absolutely fantastic writer. Your stories are original and not only are your characterizations perfect, but you have such a way with words that make your writing beautiful. Hope you write more~
Imperial Dragon chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Sebas-san always makes the food so interesting for Ciel :)
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