|Reviews for Snuffed|
| StrawberryDuckFeathers chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
.Gift for being awesome and participating in Reviewathon! .
I think that this was a good idea; I actually forgot who Jesse was, but by the way you've portrayed him, he appears to be a rather stuck-up rich boy, and I love that you've placed him in such a contrasting situation than what he's used to. I like how you show his disgust at all things poor as well- and in fact it makes me hate his snobbiness quite a bit. XD I also love how you've made him sound so snobby, in the way he showers all the time, makes his hair 'perfect' and he practices singing and dancing a lot. However, he also seems like a massive perfectionist, getting his face to be 100% symmetrical...
I loved the dramatic jump in this section : [No, Jesse St. James doesn't meet any of the requirements for poor. So why is he?] I love how dramatic you make it sound that he can't rely completely on this parents anymore, since to most readers, it would probably sound like 'it's not that big a problem' since it sounds like he's lived most of his life with little trouble anyway from this story. Seems Jesse can't handle being the best of the best anymore. I do feel a bit sorry for him since it's not a life he's used to, but at the same time, I do feel that he's just going to have to learn how to live as one of the regular folk now. It's actually quite cool that he's now gone down to somewhat of a similar level as he saw the people shopping with food stamps.
I do like that he's somewhat learnt his lesson in the end. :)
I haven't got any critique or suggestions for you, sorry! I do like how you've written about a rich boy coming to terms to living a life similar to the people he looks down to, though. Excellent job and keep up the good work! :D
| Scarlett88 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Powerful ending. :)
| StoryGirl02 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
You know I ADORE anything with Jesse st. James, and I loooove you, so this is kinda adoration and love mixed together with a side order of amazing writing! The end was definitely a shoooocker, but still a good one. Ahhhhhhhhhh, I love this. Favouriting now. Come join me and E on the whirlwind that is Glee fan fiction writing yes yes?
| EHWIES chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
OMG AT THE BOMBSHELL AT THE END OF THIS. I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. I LOVE IT. I LOVE YOU. Basically, this is absolutely fantastic. I LOVE how Jesse's views of the poor characterize him, love love love, and of course, your writing style was gorgeous as always here. "Lima's brightest star's all out of gas." YES. And the detail about his face's symmetry-YES. Just YES at this whole fic. YES YES YES. I LOVE YOU. IT IS TWO IN THE MORNING AND I AM INCOHERENT AND PEOPLE READING THIS REVIEW MUST THINK I'M CRAZY. LY!