|Reviews for Storm Chasing|
| Virtuella chapter 9 . 10/13/2011
Lovely atmosphere in this one! :)
| Thobbit chapter 8 . 12/27/2010
Nice! I felt like I would have understood and enjoyed it more if I knew anything about the Punic Wars, but good writing nonetheless.
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 7 . 12/21/2010
Nice. Good work.
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 3 . 12/12/2010
Why on earth is the bloody tardis there? Fantastic though. This may irritate you no end, in which case I apologise, but you write very like sister.
| Virtuella chapter 4 . 11/13/2010
Great concept for a story! I’m not so sure if the majority of intellectuals are as susceptible to War’s charms as you claim here (as in, real war, not academic bickering!), but there are certainly a few.
I really liked the description of the university classroom, it sounded very real to me, reminding me of some rooms at Moray House (part of Edinburgh University). I found the second chapter impressive with the sweeping vista of history from her very idiosyncratic viewpoint.
The dream sequence was good, too, though I was lost with regard to the historic details. I’m sure they were all correct, it’s just very specialized knowledge. ;-)
The last bit was great, and I can imagine how a plague of mini feuds will now overwhelm this previously peaceful place…
As always, your prose is precise and beautiful and just right in every way. Well done.