|Reviews for Mr Brightside|
| Jasper's Little Sweetheart x chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
i loved this oneshot, i hope you can make this into a full story x
| Ana chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
This fic is gorgeous! Have you ever though about doing it longer?
Please continue the story.
Thank you very much and kisses from Spain.
| GeezerWench chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
That was pretty intense and I think it was well written.
The one thing that kinda bothered me a bit though was Jasper speaking of himself in the third person.
I understand you were showing Jasper as two personalities - Jasper and the Major.
The rhyming thing was a little strange. Lends an air of horror. (Just a touch.) though it doesn't appear as though Bella heard that part.
Did seem to have the desired effect on Edward, however.
| MoonPrincess623 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Yes, I am madly in love with the Major and his alter, Jasper.
Great story! Me loveth!
| Jasper3Bella 4ever chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Jasper went insane...but I loved it!
| plainjane96 chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
I loved it. you should write more chapters, i think it'd be an interesting story
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Loved your story. Jasper is such an interesting character and seeing his other side was great. thanks
| Hisuiko chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Wonderfully intense ... would love to read more/grin.
| BokuWaHime chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
thank you very much!
I will be looking at your other stuffs!
| MovingSomewhereElse chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
I for one am madly in love with the Major. He's hot. And dangerous. A total badass. And, damn, he's sexy!
I love this story, but my mind kind-of does this weird thing when I get a taste of danger. I t goes to a dark place, and it stays there for a few hours.
| Inuyasha-twilight-fang-girl chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
That was awsome!
| carry tompson chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
to cute. do you think you could right more chapters to see what happens afterwards
| KittyAsrai chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
| thinkofaugust chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
In love with it? Hmm...under-statement of the year. I have offically decided that even though I have anothe essay to write before the end of tonight I was gonna check you out. So I did. And I'm happy.
How cute is that twirling round and round scene? LIKE 00000000000000 THIS CUTE!
or somehting like that I don't know.
anyhow...I really suck at reviews I seems to find. All i can say is htat it takes a lot for a fic to get on my faves list; i like have to LOVE it. but this is goin' on :)
Lots and lots of hugs and Jasper cookies (cause you know you want some!)
| XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
this was crazy good he should have killed eddie but oh well