please update, it's brilliant

kinda bothering me that you're writing "proves" not "proof". wrong tense, mate

Story is boring and not worth of mistakes...

An interesting story - too bad you abandoned it. That muse must truly be hiding well.

So wish that Harry would revoke Sirius' Marauder rights - no longer could he be Padfoot - and tell him how James would be so ashamed that Sirius would treat his son so shabbily and forget how someone could be framed and sent to Azkaban.

Interesting story - though so not liking Sirius' change of character.

Sirius is not in character

There is a difference between being strict and teaching a difficult subject and being a nasty git.

Confused about the years. How old was he when he was put in? Ch. 1 said he had been there 14 years. this started out saying that he needed color after five years, then said he was sentenced to 14 - but didn't I say 30?

hehehe

LOL. Sticking too close to Canon here. I was hoping Harry would've done something (more) with the Malfoys but damn. Too predictable. You just lost a reader! Congrats!

Hey! You actually do a marvelous job in your writing. Im german too, so I know the struggle! Still, i've gotten very invested in your story.

Omg since you are a german i can write in german too. XD
ich glaub ich hab lange nicht mehr eine so schöne ff gelesen. Am Anfang dachte ich ok so lala aber nach dem 10. kapitel oder so wurde es besser . und gerade jetzt liebe ich sie. ich liebe die auseinandersetzungen mit malfoy. und die bissigen kommentare oh mann ey so hamma. aber auch die freundschaft zu D muss mir manchmal echt verkneifen nicht loszulassen an manchen stellen. Es ist einfach so hamma. Und in dem Kapitel wo er die Heuler kriegt haett ich beinahe geheult ich hoffe es wird noch alles gut. Was ich eigentlich sagen wollte. Hammer ff ich hoffe sie bleibt auch weiter so da ich ja noch mitten drin bin. Danke fuer die ff die du mit deinen Ideen fuellst.

This really is a wonderful story you have written here. It was interesting to see the development of your writing especially after your exchange trip which helped the flow of the grammar. I also realize that a lot of time has past but this story really is amazing and begs to be finished.

There is really only 1 major plot points and 3 minor left to be done in the story if you don't feel like adding a lot of extra's. The major one is the battle between Harry and Voldemort when he attacks Hogwarts. The only minor plot points are Draco Malfoy, who I hope will flip sides in a more obvious way (his feelings for Hermione and his hatred for Voldemort), Sirius Black (when Harry finally forgives him), and Lucius (who survived his escape and gave a gold coin to begger Snape but has been who knows where doing who knows what since then-hopefully something against Voldemort). Minor minor things that would round out the story... Sammy the snake & something with Harry and his former students.

Really really hope you finish :)

Harry called his snake Sandy at the beginning of this chapter and his snake called him Harry Potter instead of Henry. I love this story it's pretty awesome.