Reviews for Hisagi's Rookies
MercuryPilgrim chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Ha, great story! I love the ending, I can imagine the looks of terror already. One thing though, it would be better (in my opinion) not to use the script format. The Vegeta: or Hisagi: style. It doesn't read well and looks more like a plan than an actual story. A simple, "Blah," He said, looking interested, "Blah blah?" Kind of thing. Still, I like it!

Ohh, first review dibs!