|Reviews for The First Kist|
| unoaranya30 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Hey, that story sounds familiar! I like it LOL.
I think you have a good idea here but then again, I'm sorta biased with this story :-)
There are a lot of grammar mistakes and don't worry I have trouble with that as well but I have somebody help me clean it up.
I would encourage you to continue. If you would like a beta just drop me a line and I'd be happy to take a look at what you come up with, make grammar corrections and suggestions. I would be a little slow getting back to you with my schedule but not horribly long.
If you rather not that's cool. It's always a treat to see a new SMWW story and I'm flattered that you liked mine
| Nightwing 509 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you had Clark & Diana remembering their first kiss. Please update soon.