Reviews for Innocent
almostinsane chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Love this. It would be what Vader thought. Thanks for writing this. God bless!
Hoplite39 chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
The second paragraph threw me a bit. But after that it was really good. Philosophical in some places, funny in others. Very entertaining read. Loved the bit about obi'wan's track record with padawans.
Ayy Kaim chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
How come I love father/son fics? I guess its cause I've read the novelisation of have done an awesome job, and this is VERY close to how Vader views Luke in the novelisation.
StarWarrior72 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Great story! I have always liked trying to read through the books for moments like this. I spend four hours a day (or more) trying to think of my own. As the first fanfiction I have read since making an account you have tottaly inspired me. In two days I will be posting the first chapter of my first story, I hope you will read it.
Blackgenius chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Very very interesting... I love the way you've captured Vader's self righteous sentiments. Simple but elegant writing. Well done!
Chaosmaiden07 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Jan-AQ chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Ohh I love this story! What a great job with Darth Vader's thoughts.
Princess613 chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Shivery. Just a little, but still. Like the "Mask silly" line. Very little Luke.
I love dance chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Wonderfully done! I enjoyed very much. :)
ILDV chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Very touching. Snifff...
Tina95 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Awww... That is so sweet. I love it! Some nice fatherly Darth Vader there. :)