Reviews for Aether
RoseAerin chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I Have missed my gwevin i haven't read the story yet i just wanted to say tht i have a feeling this story's going to be AMAZING!

AFTER READING YOUR STORY: THAT WAS GREAT! LOVED HOW BE FLEW AWAY ALTHOUGH i'm wondring why ben wasn't a little i don't know GROSSED OUT sometimes i feel tht kid see's 2 much good story thouh

i tryed finding the word got interrupted b my mother :(
Radar1388 chapter 3 . 2/12/2011
i really love this story, and i really hope that you continue, i will be watching for any updates
brandirandom21 chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP :D It's soooo much suspense :D
Horselover chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
Please Please continue this story I want more. This was so good I want to read about what happens between Gwen and the prince. Please update soon Please.
Independent.C chapter 3 . 11/13/2010
This is one of the best Ben 10 stories that I have ever read! Once you finish with this one, please continue with this ganre. Adventure, action, friendship, with just a splash of romance it soothes my inner closet romantic.
Skylark Evanson chapter 3 . 11/6/2010
Ironically, my friend Fia and I were talking over some elemental palm-reading stuff we learned a few years ago and just YESTERDAY, she starts talking about how her element is Water, but her /technical/ element is Aether. And I literally spit milk out all over the table. She thought I was dying, but then I started demanding what it was. She gave me the definition, but the way she explained it was more on a palm-reader's level rather than something I could directly transfer into this. But she told me the Aether is the pure spirit element. How you came up with this is just amazing... I am just in total shock, really. And now I want that unicorn boy off o' Gwen so Kevin can pummel his guts out! Somethin' not right bout that thing... . stupid unicorns, breakin' up Gwevin...

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! I love u S-dawg! Hehe.

ActiveX2012 chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
I got it now. Caleovigor means "warm spirit". Am I right? Am I close?
ActiveX2012 chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
Does Caleovigor mean warmed strength by any chance? Am I close?
Gwendolyn Tennyson chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
REALLY GOOD STORY! PLEASE KEEP UPDATING! I have a question, I don't really get the paragraphs you write slanted, I can't figure it out, Its confusing... Any who, keep it up! ;)
Super-Midget-Ninja1990 chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
Great chapter! I wish I could live on Fulguro... That'd be awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter! _
Super-Midget-Ninja1990 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I am liking where this is going Solora! Love your work _
Acarolin95 chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
Well, I definitely like this fiction. I think you should work to create a chapter to Ben 10: Ultimate Alien, because they are great. I had never thought of something like this ...

But I've two questions: What happens between Corus and Gwen? It would be great if something happened between them :D but in the end it'll be Gwevin. And the other question is, Did you've invented Caleovigor right? because I look at the wikipedia Ben 10 and nothing comes out, plus I never heard that name before.

Hahaha it was very funny that the fulgurans are unicorns.

By the way, I've a bad feeling to these fulgurans not know why, but I've.

I hope you update soon because I love this fiction.

Lyoko Barbossa chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
Something tells me that Caleovigor is an OC planet you made...
Skylark Evanson chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
*stalks story* River, ur so good at this . it's annoying how long it feels like I wait for each chapter. Even tho I realize it really isn't that long after I read it... Gwevin iz hawt stuff, girl.


keep it up. I'm antsy to read more.

ParamoreXO chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
When I saw the notification for this, I nearly died of happiness! Eeep! YAY! You are baaaack! You've been dearly missed, and this comeback is just epic!

Wow. Honestly, I was a little lost for a while in the beginning, then squealed like a fan girl at all the mushy, cute little Gwevin scenes the shows seem to be missing as of lately...and then got a little lost in the end...but I found my way back, so it's all good!(: And let me just say, this is taking my breath away! The suspense is just terrifyingly exciting! It's always addicting! And you've got me hooked on every word!

I CANNOT wait for the rest of this fic to develop, and any other fics that are most likely to appear under the Ben 10 catagory _

keep it up! Eeeep!(:
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