|Reviews for One Step Forward, Two Steps Back|
| Reader Addict chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
I started reading this and I just could not finish it. I'm sorry honey but it was a struggle to make it through the first few paragraphs. Your age is obvious in your story, sweety. I wonder if you realize that love isn't this glamorous. I was hoping that Jean would be a strong individual but your vision of her is like your name. A helpless little innocent lamb. It was far too mushy, far too full of fantasy.
I wish you luck in the future. I hope that you aren't as helpless as the character portrayed here.