Reviews for Mate and Mother ONE SHOT
Ellie chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Can i ask where Esme fits into all of this? Because i think she would probably have somethink to say about the fact that some random human just walks in playing house and Esme wasnt mentioned once in this,.x
lost mate chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
this is a story i would like to no when you er going to fishies it
Adorable Kitten chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Love the story
TokioHotelluver93 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Have you considered making this a full blown multi chapter story? I think it has potential to be an AMAZING fic. I love the one shot, with a bit of added detail and such I honestly think you could turn this into one of the best fanfics out there.
Siddystar101 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Continue please. i love the idea. please continue
Fullofpassion09 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
It's an interesting premise and would e fun to see explored further...
MCR Killjoys chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
this story is really good but i was just thinking if youve just done this as a story i think you should do a few more chapters because this story really pulls you in! :P

Becky xxxx
vampiricdogdemoness19 chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
twisted in a way but i love it
EygptianFireFly chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I personally think that this story needs another chapter simply to tie up lose ends: how does Bella take being a vampire? How does she react to Carlisle? How does the family fare for the rest of eternity?
Kilataia chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Great :)
Jenniemarie Elizabeth Cullen chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
i was wondering if you where going to finish the story i know it says one shot but i think it would be kool if you did more like bellas reaction to carlisle! please please please!
WarriorHime53 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Please update soon
shadow girls 100 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
The storie was really good i hope that you will finish it.
Alex Aces chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I liked this version of the story much more.
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
love it

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