Reviews for Mate and Mother ONE SHOT
mmsinful chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
This was actually interesting. I was a little freaked out with both Carlisle and Edward sharing, until I found out Edward was a kid. Good twist.
belladonna chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
i think you should re write this and expand. you write well, he plot is cool, do what hinders you? of course I'll accept it if you don't expand, but I'll be sad :(
jasperlittlesister chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
u better update or else. my vriend using my account please dant take serously.
Crystalove09 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
this was an interesting story i liked the way it was written and the uniquness of the plot and although i wish there was more i still think it's fine the way it is
mshawkins chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I really liked this and I wish that you would have turned this into a full story. It would have been interesting to see Bella "mother" the Cullen children especially Jasper and Rosalie.
CHAOS REIGNS OVER ALL chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Hey!

I love the whole concept of this story. I just wanted to know if I can borrow some of the idea from it and expand on it. I don't want to just steal your ideas, but it has so much potential!

Please let me know.

Zach
twilight-jemmett chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
plz do more really good
sm1982 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Beautifullly written.

Keep up the great work.

Pitythis was only a one-shot as i would have liked to read more.

SM
Randomness96 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
.GOD! This is soooo amazing! i would love for you to continue this but its also good where it ended. AH im having a total fangirl moment it is THAT amazing!
OnlyTheGoodeSpyYoung13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
hope u continue it
Rainandsleep chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
This is amazing! Now I wish I came up with this plot line :( I would of course change it into something completley differen if I got the chance but oh well! This is amazing and I love Edward and Bella'ss bond! You can even imagine a sequel lo Love this story you did a brilliant job your an amazing writer
Mika the Dark princess chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Lov it
aleangel chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Great story. I hope you may consider a story from this one shot in the future.
carmeleissle5cullen chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
wow I realy like it how Edward is possesive about Bella. And it's good that he wouldn't have a mate 'cause I just can't see him with any other than Bella
VampLover109 chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
DAMN THAT WAS GOOD AS HELL! i want more...* pouts cuz i know its a oneshot*
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