Reviews for Mate and Mother ONE SHOT
Analitica chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
ohmygod! i loved the story
We-Wrote-Our-Names-In-Blood chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Oh no this was really good!

You should really carry this on seriously!
AbbeNormal chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
You know, this would make such a cool longer story. Maybe not 40 chapters worth, but like around 15 or so. It's such a neat idea. I think you hit the nail on the head with Edward. I think he was changed before he could love his would be a mother figure. Very good. That is such a wonderful idea. You should write this as something bigger...I know I would read every chapter.

wildmageminx chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
OMG OMG I really love this story espedcially the story line, can't believe its only a one shot. Please can you expand it, Please Please Please. Thanks your AWESOME ;P
MidnightSeductress13 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
wow. i loved it update soon
MOON LIGHT RED chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
i liked it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
I really like the plot at the moment please write more
khris91 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Demon Hound chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
This is an awesome story. You should continue it to make it a story. I haven't seen this idea yet and I would very much love to see how it could turn out.
Mrs. Jim chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Interesting...a bonded mother...I guess something like that would make sense for younger vamps...only thing I'm wondering is just how young Edward was when he was changed...

I liked seeing a scary side of Carlisle...
dna2679 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
i loved this story and i hope you continue it.
oh-liv-ee-uh chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
This story is wacky to the nth degree.

It wouldn't be so strange if Bella wasn't so young. Or, better yet, if she was already a vampire when she came into their lives. It would make more sense that way, considering she's going to be a mother figure to them all.

The bizarre maternal bond she has with Edward is peculiar. How and why is it that no one found it odd that Edward was growling at everyone in sight? I'm baffled that no one questioned Edwards unusual behavior throughout the day, including Bella herself.

And while I'm at it, I have to admit that Bella referring to Edward as 'baby boy' made me cringe every time I read it.

Bella is definitely no Esme...

Yeah, I'm still scratching my head on this one.
charlie chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
wow that was so intense! I love it
deletedon17thjan13 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
wow! would you by any chance be able to make a similar story like this or continue this? its a brilliant ideas and has loads of potential!
Kerridwen1531 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Awesome fic. You should turn it into a multi chapter story! I am very intrigued as to what happens next!
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