Reviews for Mate and Mother ONE SHOT
oh-jeez-louise chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
This was great. I really liked the relationship between Bella and Edward and how the whole thing played out. I'm curious as to the whole family dynamic and where it goes from here so if you ever get bored and want to write more chapters I would gladly read them.
lynne0731 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010

This would make one hell of a multi chapter story with this as a intro!1 I really loved it!
kelly232 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Great one shot - you could extend it to a full story - go through how Bella takes the news and everyhting else
Angel JJK chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Loved it! Love how Edward acted in this! Would love it if you made this or one similar into a longer story!
TheOneMama chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Great one shot. Wonderfull idea and story. Cant wait from more from you.
JeaBaby chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
aww i think this would make a great story u should think about it anyway i like the story
VampairePrincess chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Is this a short story? Because I would luv 2 read it if it's a story
Sassy Mami chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
That was really good, too bad it was only a o/s. Hope one day you make it into a story.
bakerusaf chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
holy macaroni, amazing oneshot!
TrappedBetweenRealityAnFantasy chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY! I can't wait to read the next installment. please continue it soon.
Skullqueencb chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
this a good fic. i know you said it was a one shot but it could be more.
Lori94 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Hmmm... very interesting! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Good frist chapter.
la piranha chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
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