Reviews for Bleach: The Afterlife Saga
redstonepowder chapter 14 . 4/25
bethkunoichi chapter 41 . 3/17
So after finishing this arc I have come to a conclusion: no matter how much I enjoyed this story, I can't get past the fact that it's just not possible for a zanpakuto to exist after its wielder is dead. They're part of the same soul, so if they die, they die. It makes sense for kyouka suigetsu to still be around, since aizen isn't dead and physical manifestation is possible, plus her rather unique abilities. Sorry, but this is just an issue for me. Also, Komamura is one of my favorites, so I'm a little miffed that you killed him off. I will keep reading for now, but I remain hesitant.
bethkunoichi chapter 31 . 2/20
Ok, you really can't just attach -san onto everyones names! It doesn't work like that, there are many different endings that all, mean something different. -san is always respectful but still more familiar than -sama. If you're going to add on hyphens then you need to learn how to use them properly, or just don't use them. You don't have to.
Virginia I chapter 13 . 2/19
You made Ichigo apologize for DYING? Low man, that's just low.
bethkunoichi chapter 16 . 2/18
Ok just one thing. You had Shinji address Ichigo as Ichigo-san, but because Shinji is his superior he should have addressed him as Ichigo-kun. -San is respectful and used for superiors, but is more familiar than -sama. Keep writing, I love it!
bethkunoichi chapter 14 . 2/18
This is so good! I'm really loving this story. Other than a few typos, there's not a lot that you miss. Just make sure you reread your writing to catch all those little mistakes. One thing that stood out to me though is that you keep referring to 'scars' whe you should be talking about cuts or wounds. Scars are what's left when a wound has healed, so when Ichigo hits Dialgo get gets a cut not a scar. That's the only big thing though.
NARUMOKA chapter 69 . 1/5
finish this fanfic soon
isle chapter 69 . 12/15/2014
this is indeed epic fanfiction...i never read something so well written like this...its a shame if you dont finish it..i m waiting for your update...gmbatte
isle chapter 11 . 12/12/2014
this is well written fanfic...its epic...nice one...keep going...!
FallenHuntr chapter 69 . 11/23/2014
Guest chapter 69 . 10/29/2014
ouuuuuujo ouuuuuuuuujo Kyaaaaa xD
Vallyxxxxxxxxxx chapter 23 . 7/7/2014
where is ichigo's bankai and hollow mask don't say you have forgotten them
wait for your leisure time chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Puppy 12 chapter 4 . 5/4/2014
Why is your story so good I'm late at 1 am damn it I have school
Great chapter 69 . 4/11/2014
Although its finished, I hope that the epilogue is a wedding and kids for Ichigo and Rukia. Looking forward to more!
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