I don't know if you'd figured it out along the way but, 'sensei' means 'teacher', not doctor. So I don't think Fugaku would call Sakura 'sensei'... but... uh, I guess? it just sounds weird...

I do like the book but... Fugaku is ooc. He's a very stern man, and if I am getting this right, he already has a son yeah? (that's what he said earlier), so, I'm definitely sure he's seen worse than a child without eyes. way worse. he shouldn't be so concerned. it's not like him.

Hey-o! Reading this over a second time :) Could you please make a drabble series about Young Sakura and Hidan? That'd be the most adorable thing ever and I'd love you forever and ever if you did it!

This is amazing!

Mhm liking it so far

Thanks for the Lexicon lol

Interesting. Wonder how she sees now, sensing with her chakara?
Guessing she'll end up with Shisui's eyes.

why does everyone call her sensei like she's eleven, unless I missed something and sensei means something other then teacher.

I love this story! Never read anything like this before!

I don't know if you've been told this before, but there aren't any species of bats that are blind. Just about all of them actually have pretty god eyesight, it's just not as good as other nocturnal animals.

Other than that, I'm really into your story so far!

Sometimes I wish it would be that easy to share a person. Damn. Ez.

I like to listen to music when I read and a goodbye to the world came on during kisame vs. obito. that was a gigantic kick in the feels

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Just something I found rather weird. I have 5 year olds and they don't speak with that much refinement like Sasuke, that didn't bother me as much as Itachi wondering who was the girl who enticed his 4 yr old brother. I'm not gonna stop reading because of that slip, but I cringed a little. Children that age are loud, noisy, losing the baby babble, asking why/how at every turn and they're not really interested in the opposite sex.
Overall I really like this story. Sakura sound mature, there was a lot of action right on the first chapter and Itachi is already showing signs that he'll become obsessed with finding out everything about Sakura

I know this story is old, I read this as my 6 year old daughter snoozes peacefully, lol. I couldn't help myself, this has been so precious, creative, and all the praise because there aren't words, haha. You have managed to create something without being cliche or pulling anyone out of character. The characters behave how one imagines they would given situations that we haven't seen them in (Genma is really well done), and your original characters fill the space without being stagnant. Just bravo. I hope you continue to share your creativity with the rest of us, no matter the medium.