That was so fucking awesome...

Took me a moment to realize they were saying "no" not "lie". lol. It sounds interesting so far. (: I'll keep reading!

San is used as a polite honorific for people who don't know each other well, friends or even acquaintances drop the San and kun would be used for males to designate their relationship.

Love it

There are several minor issues that still bug me. I know I've thought about saying them in a review before, but am not certain if I have actually done so. My apologies if any of this is repeated. While I was a English teacher for a time, the same condition that forced me to retire also scrambles my memory and focus somewhat.

There are a number of odd usages, strange words and strange ways of saying things. For example, while I know that volatile can be used to mean something flying, that use is extremely obsolete, and even when it was in use it was an adjective, not the noun you've treated it as.

As you may or may not realize, English is a language of exceptions, packed to the brim with exceptions and special cases. "News" is one such word. Despite being both singular and plural, and ending in s, it is always treated as being singular. The only time you would use it to conjugate as a plural would be using it as an adjective, such as "several news reports" or "Several pieces/articles of news have come to light regarding..." etc.

A good rule of thumb when wondering whether to double the last consonant of a word is to note that the doubling is usually used to preserve a short vowel sound. In this chapter, you wrote 'bidding' when you meant 'biding'. The first means to place a bid, or can refer to a person's orders, while the second means to bide, or wait.

There are more things to say about this story that I just can't recall at the moment. One really big one, that I likely should have started with, is this: This is a superb story, extremely well written. There are very few published works that I return to to reread. This story is one of those. If you sought a career as a writer, I think you would enjoy great success. If you continue to write as a hobby, I'll certainly continue to read what you post.

ha ha ha I love Kisame

Love your story!

Gotta admit, I'm not happy that it's turned into ItaSakuKisa. I thought maybe he was just an extra, like in most fanfictions. I really hope nothing happens between them because, no disrespect or anything, it'd creep me out. I just don't like KisaSaku. But I've gotten too far into the fanfic to stop reading now although all this talk of paedophiles and realising how great the age gaps are, freak me out nearly as much as KisaSaku... I can't help but feel like a lot of people are reeeeeeally OOC.

I think that she dont remember very well what hapened to her ...

OMG! I love this story I can't get enough ! I love what you do its simple awesome! _ _

Love love love this story! Can't wait to read the sequel!

Hey I realise that this fic I'd all ready complete but I just wanted to point out that you said Sakura rooted her eyes which is just a little bit impossible. But while I'm reviewing I would like to say that so far this story is amazing, five stars.

This is possibly my 5th time reading this story and it gets better every time. It never fails to shock me, or turn me into an emotional mess and I want you to know you did amazing and an astounding job on this peice.

Sakura loves Hidan so much It makes me happy :D

Awww, I love Gaara so much.
I know GaaSaku probably isn't in the future but it's my OTP so any type of interaction like that makes me grin like a maniac, I swear to god xD