|Reviews for The Fifth Grade|
| BornAverage chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
This was cute. :3
I especially liked her monologues. Sounded very Helga-like.
Oh, and I loved how this was written:
"She greets Brainy with a good punch in the nose."
| kittykittyhunter chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Aaaw. Poor Helga. She tried so hard... and failed so bad. ;
I really liked the dialogue in your story - you stayed true to the show's characterisation and paid a lot of close attention to how everyone talks.
I did feel that there were quite a few places where you could have cut out the tagging ("he said", "she said" etc.), but in general, this was pretty enjoyable.
I could definitely hear everyone in my head, lol.
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Heh, yeah, she'd never forget him.
Keep the good writing.
| Kpfan72491 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Loved it :)