Reviews for The Fifth Grade
BornAverage chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
This was cute. :3

I especially liked her monologues. Sounded very Helga-like.

Oh, and I loved how this was written:

"She greets Brainy with a good punch in the nose."

Genius!
kittykittyhunter chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Aaaw. Poor Helga. She tried so hard... and failed so bad. ;

I really liked the dialogue in your story - you stayed true to the show's characterisation and paid a lot of close attention to how everyone talks.

I did feel that there were quite a few places where you could have cut out the tagging ("he said", "she said" etc.), but in general, this was pretty enjoyable.

I could definitely hear everyone in my head, lol.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Heh, yeah, she'd never forget him.

Keep the good writing.
Kpfan72491 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Loved it :)