Reviews for Team K21
MonosGodOfPain chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Love most of the quotes especially "Only the strong survive...then why are there Covenant?
Credete chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
I really want to like your story, but the fact that you give little or no indication as to who is talking, giving just sentence after sentence of what they say, it's rather hard. Fix the annoying statement after statement approach, and you can have a great story. At the moment it's nearly impossible to see who is saying what. I will wait for your next update, and I hope it is better.