|Reviews for Crutches|
| DuHSPaZZiNGFeL chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
I have to say, sometimes being bored at school can be a good thing, especially when authors like you come up with these awesome ideas! Hey, I daydream all the time, and Religion class (which I'm forced to take), is the perfect time to do it.
Plus, you have certainly succeeded. The writing was sweet and the brotherly love made my heartstrings tug. :) I hope to see more from you soon!
| oakleaf chapter 2 . 10/15/2010
:) Oakleaf likes this.
It's short yet gets the point across comepletely and beautifully. Thank you for a great read.
| Little Patch of Heaven chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
Wonderful! This story really portrays exactly what's driving at each Elric brother. You've perfectly captured their personalities, mindset, and it really shows their thinking. One line I really liked that I had never thought of before was the "he can't cry, so I won't" or something. I'm paraphrasing, it was worded better I know.
The writing is very simplistic, but it's perfect for this. It wouldn't have seemed like their pov if it was more wordy and elegant sounding.