Reviews for Bella's Dawn
CoppertopJ chapter 1 . 2/20
Wow, totally disappointed in Bella, and even Edward. They handled the Seth business terribly, but the real disappointment is that they just got their baby girl, and she spent her first night of life without either parent, because they couldn't put shit aside to concentrate on their daughter. Not a good start.
Ladybear0506 chapter 59 . 9/23/2015
I'm worried about Carlisle. Great job on the different POV
Ladybear0506 chapter 56 . 9/23/2015
Anxious to find out what happens with Seth! And watch Bella take Jane down!
Ladybear0506 chapter 54 . 9/23/2015
Thank goodness! I was hoping Bella's shield would come out to play!
Ladybear0506 chapter 48 . 9/22/2015
Wow that was a tear jerker with Carlisle and Edward. Great chapter.
Ladybear0506 chapter 45 . 9/22/2015
Loved the time jump... The story really needed it and Nessa needed to grow. Love the story by the way! So under reviewed...
Ladybear0506 chapter 36 . 9/21/2015
Loved the line Nessa says... I'll be like other babies quiet and stupid. Hilarious! Love this kid!
Ladybear0506 chapter 15 . 9/19/2015
I just love Emmette and Jasper in this chapter! They are so dang funny!
lisamccool388 chapter 27 . 7/29/2015
Aw
lisamccool388 chapter 41 . 11/1/2014
I love this. Story so good it. Awesome
lisamccool388 chapter 25 . 11/1/2014
i love this story it is so good
EmmettRose chapter 43 . 10/9/2014
So glad to see Bella go home and promise never to leave again. I hope she keeps that promise. But I guess just because she is a vamp she is still only 18 so kids still make mistakes. So maybe she grew up some :)
what chapter 41 . 10/8/2014
What the heck is a hectare? How many acres is that?
EmmettRose chapter 35 . 10/8/2014
Bella is playing a fool's game. How are they going to stay in forks at the rate Nessa is growing? To many people have seen her now because of Bella's actions.
EmmettRose chapter 34 . 10/7/2014
Bella gets off on torturing Edward.
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