Reviews for Beaten
Thalia-Longworth chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Continue please
leilalovesncis chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
keep writing!
Saissa chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
"What are wives for?"

That is a really really sick statement for a man to make!
KittyInBoyShorts chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Jim should have shot ray for saying that
EriCal223 chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
omg that was a good story it should have been more than just a one shot ... bummer "
EdwardCullenROX chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I loved reading it plzzz plzzzz continue this story
penonin94 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
please continue!
Freak-of-the-night21 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I think you should continue
lolyncut chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I'm glad I found this. The series continues in ten days. Can't wait.
OceanEyes16 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
MORE! Please, please do another few chapters! This is so good!
ATLjunkie chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
i want you to continue! ? :)
LivelyStevens chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Please continue. I hated when the show ended. We were just starting to see a side of Jim that I didnt know he had.
Redlioness62 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
You can't stop there, please continue. (I hope he does get to punch out Ray on the shoW :-) that would be so cool!)
Beth - Geek Chick chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Really like this story, hope you're able to continue it. Storyline sounds really, really exciting and interesting.
JTF2 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
more please! :):)
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