|Reviews for I Wish|
| silverstri chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
oh my aeru is so sweet!
| stravvberry chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
I liked your story. I think you managed to get the characters right aswell. Since this is your first story writtin in first person I tried to really look at how you wrote that. I think choosing to call neviril you instead of her was a nice touch, it Aeru seem closer to her that way. Maybe it could use some external descriptions so that it isn't so much I-I-I. But thats me looking to give you tips and not a speceific need since this did make the story more internal, as in more about her feelings.
Well I hope my review made a bit sense im sorry I'm verry tired at the moment and since english isnt my first language I tend to suck at it when I get tired.
| anon chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Great story especially since it's your first time writing in first person.
You can only get better the more you write so keep going :D