every time I read this part I cry, everything is just written so good

Great chapter, looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next.

Until the next one.

Damn. You never fail to pit a tear on my eyes. Its already a decade when firsy read this fic of your and it never fail to touch my heart. Even if this chaoter is short compared to others. It still tear jerking. Thank you.

yori just gave up his life to save naruto's life, didn't he? what is causing that racket outside the hospital?

good chap

Great job loved it thanks for all your hard work

Very interesting update that’s as worth the wait

Thank you so much for the update! Hope things will be better soon

While i love the story for sure, i couldve swore at some point you wanted to end it? Or was it another story i read at about the same time... oh well great story nonetheless

Good update, though shorter than your other chapters. Can't wait for the next one. And oh, it's been a month since your last update.

That's one helluva cliffy, I can respect it even if I don't like it. I hope Kakashi beats Sasuke's ass and drags him back tho.

This is a wonderful Fanfiction! I can't wait to see which direction you'll be going with Naruto / Sasuke relationship. Will you go traditional cannon or do something different? I'm hoping something different and less obsessive than the original. LoL!

Great job loved it

I agree kakashi is kinda shit tho. Especially in this arc.

You’re very inconsistent with Naruto’s skill level. For all the touted genius he is, the only part of it you show is learning at a high rate and his inconsistent(for lack of another synonym) insight. The lack of awareness in the other characters (ex. Hiruzen, iruka, kakashi) is off-putting as well. It seems a lot of people forget that kakashi is a once a lifetime genius as well, especially in his intellect.

I like the story though.