|Reviews for The Charmer and the Lost Girl|
| WiseOldSoul chapter 1 . 11/6
i love your stories.
i enjoyed this little O/S of redemption...
however, i somehow am kind of left a bit unsatisfied.
not of your writing... never of your writing,
but of Demetri and how quick to forgive Bella was.
i realize 30 years of misery for both have passed, but somehow
that doesn't seem to be enough for me.
heartless witch am i? perhaps, but i wished that he suffered a bit
more even after bella being found and knowing all, i wished she
would have somehow held out a bit more and punish him for
his actions a little more...for at least 50 years since vampires live forever,
50 years seem nothing compared to eternity once forgiveness is awarded.
just putting myself in bella's shoes and how she must have felt when he
fked her then Heidi and all of the things he said to her, how bella must have
truly felt miserable to want to die, ready to kill herself over him after
going on a 30 year rampage of sort...
just my own little opinion..but i have enjoyed the story very well of course,
with just a little of my own tweeking ;)
ty as always for your stories !
| babyvfan chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Don't ship it but did like the story
| elietkaterina chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
| Caliborn96 chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
| jkjc6111010 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Oh how yummy is this! I do love me some Demetri, though for some reason I always picture him ala Demetri in the Vampire Academy series lol. Love this
| lucylu0508 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
What an absolutely fantastic story! Demetri is one of my favorite vamps and this is one of the best fics I've read that features him. I hope you decide to write more with Demetri and Bella :-)
| Robin.D chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
wow that was good :o) :o) Loved It :o) :o)
| Lalina92 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
aww got me all chocked up
| Siren's Call To The Dead chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
It's deep. Good.
| Jalice223 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
| horrorstar100 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
I agree Demitri rocks he's so cool as well as the bad ass witch twins and powerful leaders the entire volturi rule.
| aleja1 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I live this pairing! This is my first time reading this pair and it's such an awesome o/s
| ehqueue chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Beautiful. Thank you so much.
| Lies Behind The Wings chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
More? Please? It is just so absolutely beautiful...