Reviews for When the Professionals are Unprofessional
x-Pick'n'Mix-x chapter 23 . 11/22/2010
OMG! what a cliff hanger! please update soon! im on the edge of my seat here! :D
Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 23 . 11/22/2010
Now comes the tough part of getting Crane to go. But.. why would he do it? Hmm... Please post quickly. I'll be waiting!


Falco aesalon chapter 23 . 11/21/2010
*jaw drops* Major curveball there! Now surprised not though, Crane being so dang nasty.
recumbentgoat chapter 22 . 11/17/2010
LOL! good for Gregson-maybe they'll finally catch this child killer.
x-Pick'n'Mix-x chapter 22 . 11/17/2010
woah! this is getting really intense! i cant wait to find out whats goin on! :)
Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 21 . 11/16/2010
At least they got her now...

Great job!

mrspencil chapter 21 . 11/16/2010
All the yarders seem stretched to the limits and you are introducing some very interesting delighted to read more:)

Mrs P :)
Cryptix chapter 21 . 11/16/2010
Hee! Oh, this is shaping up to be very interesting, indeed. I love that this story is giving us such a good look at the Inspectors, like this case and the events around it are laying everyone bare whether they like it or not. The mystery itself seems to be progressing pretty slowly, but I can forgive that in light of the wonderful character development we're getting instead. D
aragonite chapter 21 . 11/16/2010
I've been following this desperately with horrible internet connections...what a place to stop! WAH!
Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 20 . 11/15/2010
Great job! Can't wait for more!

mrspencil chapter 20 . 11/15/2010
I liked the reference to ths case of the Baker St again the dynamics between officers are fascinating. Where is Holmes though?

Mrs P:)
wlk68 chapter 19 . 11/15/2010
I must confess that I'm starting to get a little worried about Holmes. I hope he turns up soon...and all in one piece. :-)
recumbentgoat chapter 19 . 11/14/2010
loved the family dynamic at the dinner table.
mrspencil chapter 19 . 11/14/2010
Another glimpse of the Lestrades at home. This all seems like the calm before a storm

Mrs P :)
Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 19 . 11/14/2010
Good job. This story is getting more suspenseful every chapter. Any more updates?

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