Reviews for A Race Against Time
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 17 . 11/10/2014
Oh my goodness. That reminded me of The Cheesecake Factory's white chocolate raspberry cheesecake that is to die for.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 16 . 11/9/2014
Well I may have never seen a villainous (sorta) Emmett before this story. Nor a Carlisle I kinda wanted to punch in the pretty face.
I'm really loving Vlad and Stefan…but like Renesmee did I always found them fascinating.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 14 . 11/9/2014
Whoa! I'm guessing that is Kate?
My little theory about a potential traitor is solidifying. Of course, I could be waaay off base and maybe i'm just paranoid?
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 12 . 11/9/2014
Im still chuckling about James…
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 10 . 11/9/2014
That was friggin' hilarious! James is a total doofus.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 9 . 11/9/2014
The Irish coven are pretty cool.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 8 . 11/9/2014
Haha! Great final lines there.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 6 . 11/9/2014
Jeez…who the heck is he supposed to trust?
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 5 . 11/9/2014
Okay just finished reading all of the first five chapters over the last few hours and this is already a really amazing, creative story!
You are really good at fleshing out the characters and building the suspense.
Tashakcooks chapter 32 . 12/14/2013
Great story! I really liked your take on how vampires and humans could interact together.
PreciousJuls chapter 30 . 12/5/2013
Really good story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you!
PreciousJuls chapter 29 . 12/5/2013
I knew his maker was giving him the money. I just never figure out it was Esme :)
PreciousJuls chapter 25 . 12/5/2013
I'm kinda bummed that Bella didn't have her shield to protect her from Jane cause i never really like her. I really don't like Alice either(except in the book). So I'm glad she is not really big in this story.
PreciousJuls chapter 24 . 12/5/2013
So Alec hates his evil little sister too! Can't wait to see what happens next.
PreciousJuls chapter 23 . 12/5/2013
Now it's getting serious! Here comes the guard.
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