Reviews for The Golden Banana
AidenVanHelsing chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Fantastic story!
Robpfan chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Hmmmm... great prompt, great story, great blowjob... great ending... I fucking love 'Stroke Me' by Billy Sguire...

I danced to it in HS...yeah, I'm that fucking

Anyways... do you write many stories from prompts? Do you write from songs... I would love to read them...

Take care
liz3615 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
So THAT'S where all the massive cocks are! lol...

I love all of your Jaspers :) This one was, indeed, a lot of fun. Hopefully you'll bring out Strippersper to play again real soon.

Very nice way to start the weekend. Thank you!
cocoalvin chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
What an unexpected treat that was TS. Strippersper ... Hmmm ... So damn hot. And thanks to Dannie for the prompt.
Julestwentysix chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Loved it so much fun and so hot with not a hint of angst in sight. I think everyone will fall in love with Strippersper. You are such a talented writer and do fluffy as brilliantly as you do angst. And thanks to Dannie for prompting you to write and share. Jx
mycrookedsmile chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
unf. not only is strippersper hot, but he was so good to sweet baby Edward.
kinney-69 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Omg that was so hot and sweet and yummy and...*gulp*...angst


I loved these two. Jasper was SO sexy! And sweet, shy, blushing Edward...*sigh* simply adorable. And gah! that lapdance...*thud*...and the kisses...and the grinding...and Edward's first time...*sigh*

Only one problem...I want MORE! Lol...

Thank you sweetie:) And thanks to Dannie for the plot bunnies...:)
cabr chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Yes! It was lots of fun. I would like to see what happens next :). Are you considering expanding this? It would be fun. Your Jasper's are always scrumptious :)
twistedbytwilight chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
OMG YOU USED KID ROCK! Fuck, I love that song.

I hadn’t even scrolled down yet on the first screen and I was already smilin’ and rarin’ to go….Carlisle….”Fuck me, Daddy.” You are evil, pure and simple, TS. I fucking love that.

Sweet little innocent, virginal Edward is so cute, isn't he? The “pull” between them is just everywhere you write.

Wish I could have been standing in that hallway to watch. *sigh*
laylak500 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Wonderful! like everything you write. A bit of angst-free was just what needed. Thank You
I'm a GreenMartian chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Pheeeewww that was hot!

I like Strippsersper a lot.

Firefly1989 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Can I join team Strippersper lovers? Pretty please? :)

It made me all giggly, I loved it! I can't help but ask: any chance you could continue? I swear, when you mentioned his shirt buttoned up wrong, I fell in love... Desperately, irrevocably *snort, giggle* Tell me what to do, I'll do it! Just to see more of those two...;)

Oh and btw, I love the name of the club... My laughter was probably too loud considering it's 10 p.m. here :)

tigger5600 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
wow! That was so HOT! :)
Lisa-FanFicCrazy chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I LOVED IT! So good!
robownsme chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
LOVE IT! This was so amazing. I don't mind a little no angst at all. Your Strippersper was great! He was so sweet with Edward, and thank you for leaving it open ended like that. It would be great to get a chapter here and there about these two. *hint hint* :)
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