|Reviews for The Golden Banana|
| Cullen47 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I know you meant for this to be a oneshot but PLEASE consider continuing it! It was funtastic!
| London Man chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Another amazing work. It was HOT!
| Lori94 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
OMG! That was HOT! Love it!
| VAVikingGirl chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Strippersper reminds me of Anita's stripper boyfriends in the Anita Blake series. :)
I loved Strippersper and Virginward. They are so cute together. You do fluff well, of course you do it all well.
| mssmith chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Holy shit! Who wouldn't love Strippersper? This was one of the sweetest J/E O/S's ever written. I absolutely loved it. I can even picture them down the road, learning from each other. Thank you for this wonderful little story.
| owenic chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Well, I'm certain this could EASILY be made into a 20 chapter J&E story, yes?
After M&A is done, I'm sure Strippersper's urge to help Edward in the gay-world will make you do it, right? Because Jasper would be so wonderful to Edward for his first time...
Come on TS, you know you want to... LOL
This was awesome, btw. HOT as hell.
God bless Dannie for planting plot bunnies...
| AidenVanHelsing chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
| Robpfan chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Hmmmm... great prompt, great story, great blowjob... great ending... I fucking love 'Stroke Me' by Billy Sguire...
I danced to it in HS...yeah, I'm that fucking old...lol
Anyways... do you write many stories from prompts? Do you write from songs... I would love to read them...
| liz3615 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
So THAT'S where all the massive cocks are! lol...
I love all of your Jaspers :) This one was, indeed, a lot of fun. Hopefully you'll bring out Strippersper to play again real soon.
Very nice way to start the weekend. Thank you!
| cocoalvin chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
What an unexpected treat that was TS. Strippersper ... Hmmm ... So damn hot. And thanks to Dannie for the prompt.
| Julestwentysix chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Loved it so much fun and so hot with not a hint of angst in sight. I think everyone will fall in love with Strippersper. You are such a talented writer and do fluffy as brilliantly as you do angst. And thanks to Dannie for prompting you to write and share. Jx
| mycrookedsmile chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
unf. not only is strippersper hot, but he was so good to sweet baby Edward.
| kinney-69 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Omg that was so hot and sweet and yummy and...*gulp*...angst
I loved these two. Jasper was SO sexy! And sweet, shy, blushing Edward...*sigh* simply adorable. And gah! that lapdance...*thud*...and the kisses...and the grinding...and Edward's first time...*sigh*
Only one problem...I want MORE! Lol...
Thank you sweetie:) And thanks to Dannie for the plot bunnies...:)
| cabr chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Yes! It was lots of fun. I would like to see what happens next :). Are you considering expanding this? It would be fun. Your Jasper's are always scrumptious :)
| twistedbytwilight chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
OMG YOU USED KID ROCK! Fuck, I love that song.
I hadn’t even scrolled down yet on the first screen and I was already smilin’ and rarin’ to go….Carlisle….”Fuck me, Daddy.” You are evil, pure and simple, TS. I fucking love that.
Sweet little innocent, virginal Edward is so cute, isn't he? The “pull” between them is just everywhere you write.
Wish I could have been standing in that hallway to watch. *sigh*