Reviews for The Golden Banana
Bankai05 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
this was the hottest thing i have ever read! more of these two. this has potential for story
FlintFyre chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Jesus. For someone who really likes writing angst, you make a good happy-yet-not-nauseating story. I love your writing. I've probably read this one-shot way too many times to be healthy...
simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
That was so hot! No wonder u won for best one shot. U should continue this, then u can add all the sngst u want! Your writing is so amazing. I love it. I would def read this story if u continue. And u know edward would end up being jealous and u could go wild on ur angst! Another great story. Melissa
MeiSun chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Fabulous! It could have been jaded or cynical, but it was sweet and positive. Oh, and fuckhot, too! Thanks! :)
nadia alex chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
I always love the way you write its just so hot... i would love to read further about there first sex if you have it in you i would love that.
shewoolf chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I would LOVE to see you extend this story...oh, I don't know... to maybe 50-60 chapters?

I loved it!
GeeklyChic95 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Fuckin A! i Loved!

random random random chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
This is a good story!
HeatherAbdelrahman chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
OH GOOOD GAWD! Well, that was totally erotic and HOT! Damn. I need a cold shower now!
missysaaa.crystal chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Gotta love shyward!
Conorlovegood chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Didn't realise this was one of yours, I loved this when I read it. Another great one !
Michaela07 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011

holiday, loooong hours spent in a car. I finaly gave up and downloaded your story on my cell. Its battery died just as Jasper approached Edward for a lap dance. I was like screaming f...! Only I couldnt because of my DH sitting just inches next to me... So I literally searched the KFC for a table with a socket, plugged the charger in and read the rest of the story while the others from our group were eating. Glancing around and taking deep breath every once in a while, so the others wouldnt have suspiciously ask WHAT I was reading... I blame you. I utterly and completely blame your writing for my imposible behavior LOL

Thanks for sharing :)
Hollibell chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Gah. I want more, lol. Black Stetson and a leather g-string...oh, holy hell! That was so freaking hot, I could melt into goo.
Mrs-Banana chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
well hot damn babe.. *fans self looking for a towel*
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
What a sexy story! You are such a gifted writer! Every story you write touches my heart and turns me on! Please consider expanding on Stripster and Innocentward, as you did M&A, or atleast a few more chapters?
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