|Reviews for The Golden Banana|
| Mxpi1970 chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
:D made me very horny :D thanks
| sue273 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
This was such fun and so hot to read. Just what I needed after writing an angst-filled chapter for my story.
How about chapter 2 - their first date and Shyward losing his virginity? Just a suggestion! Or am I begging? xx
| babyot chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I don't have any idea without looking at my browser history how I landed on this freaking jem of a o/s, but hats off to you for writing such a fanfuckingtastic bit of fic. This Jasper is too good, and having hooked up with a stripper before who was such a good soul, I found it fully believable. I was equally as eager and wide-eyed as your sweet Edward, so kudos for this fun little romp. Of course, it doesn't hurt that I have a thing for this pairing in all it's incarnations . Thanks for entertaining me so completely while I was all sad panda waiting for an update in my inbox!
| FoxxyJ chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Woohoo, damn girl, you got the hot boy love down pat! Far out, i loved Strippersper and Virginward. So cute he was. I loved how he knew what he wanted after given just a little encouragement. Great o/s. Thank you, sweetie. You paint the clearest pictures with your words in my head. I love it.
| daniellegale chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Huh, how very sweet.
Loved reading it.
| HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
oooh love strippersper! I wrote a small multi chap story called long tall texan starring Jasper as well. lol. great one shot hun!
| hpgirl4ever chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Nice, very hot! )
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
I definitely want you to continue this!
| JaceDamian23 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
my friend reced this to me...one of their favorite stories on here and I must say that I loved it. It was so naughty. So fucking hot! I love a bad boy Jasper and a shy innocent Edward. Great job
| KilljoyCyanideExploder chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
even though this is just a one shot i think it would be an awesome story. But i loved it! lol your friend comes up with the weirdest ideas. Jasper giving Edward a lap dance? in a hallway? wtf but it was great! good job
| kgq chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
great story love your Jasper and how beautiful your Edward was it was wonderful
| 35nanou chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
J'aime beaucoup cet OS qui aurait bien mérité une suite
Merci et bravo
| harrytwifan chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Yeah, I kind of fell in love with Strippersper as well.
Great story - oh so hot! And I do always love Twinkward!
| malleelee chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Thank you for this lovely bedtime story. Shyward and the hard bodied Jasper stripward will be in my dreams, even if not in my panties. Pleasant dreams, you all!
| FreaKiki chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Oh my gosh! Fucking amazing! Love Stripper Jasper! And Edward, omg! Wish there was more to read!