Reviews for The Golden Banana
KilljoyCyanideExploder chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
even though this is just a one shot i think it would be an awesome story. But i loved it! lol your friend comes up with the weirdest ideas. Jasper giving Edward a lap dance? in a hallway? wtf but it was great! good job
kgq chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
great story love your Jasper and how beautiful your Edward was it was wonderful
35nanou chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
J'aime beaucoup cet OS qui aurait bien mérité une suite

Merci et bravo

harrytwifan chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Yeah, I kind of fell in love with Strippersper as well.

Great story - oh so hot! And I do always love Twinkward!
malleelee chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Thank you for this lovely bedtime story. Shyward and the hard bodied Jasper stripward will be in my dreams, even if not in my panties. Pleasant dreams, you all!
FreaKiki chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Oh my gosh! Fucking amazing! Love Stripper Jasper! And Edward, omg! Wish there was more to read!
Nitefall-sac chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
when I first found your story, I wasn't sure I'd be drawn into the concept...but I soon discovered I was wrong. You have a wonderfully engaging literary writing style which drew me into your story so you weren't so much watching from a distance, but were sitting at a nearby table watching the story unfold. (what can I say, I was a little afraid i might have to explain why i had glitter on my hands and face) You really need to give us another couple of chapters with these characters. They are all so adorable and you've given substance and life to each one. Hopefully Jasper is softly breathing, nibbling and whispering in your ear as Edward's finger tips slowly slide down Jasper's chest and gently tug at his nipple ring as they try to influence you to tell us more of their story. Take care!
Mikkaa chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
THAT was AWESOME! Ashame it is only a one shot. I would love to see how things work out with them..

simplynothingtosay chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
What a fun, angst-free hidden gem! So glad someone on Rob's IMDB board mentioned your story.
DarkOneBL chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Loved it! So Hot! I wouldn't mind reading another chapter with Jasper and Edward, maybe an epilog.
jasam19 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
WOW! LOVED it! I would really love to see you continue this. I would love to see Jasper help Edward on his journey. Thank for sharing.
Crispy Rice chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
That was hottt, I laughed at the title cause my teacher actually did one night at a strip club at a one Golden Banana, and it was theme night of superheros. He had no idea what he was in for but he just knew it was good pay. Eager middle-aged women, a Superman cape and thong, and a very frightened man he recalled. HA!
justxwords chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Hot stuff, doll ;)
dA-mama23434 chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Perma-grin! Loved it!
Raven's twimom chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
IM in love with stripster whooohoooohoooo!
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