Reviews for the four horsemens heirs
killer4853 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
please update
DragonFire Princess chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
I Love the way this story is writing, Hope you'll uploads the story soon; I want to know what happen next in the story. So please update the story ASAP.

When will you continue this story?

I want to know what will happen next in the story.
Deadman19 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Good concept but the spelling errors(I'm not perfect either), plus it just sort of stammers along. I like the idea but this isn't exactly the best presentation. Keep working on it though.
god of all chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Lady Kaiki chapter 2 . 9/17/2011
very interesting story, hope to read more ! x

plz update soon ! x
AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
awesome
ElementalShadow chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Hmmm...I do enjoy a good story. This is a story with a good concept but I'm not going to sugar coat anything here. I personally think that you should get into a bit more detail. I love the concept but some of the presentation is stammered. Do not be discouraged. Great writers did not just pull an amazing story out of their ass. Wish to hell I could.
god of all chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Time Shadow744 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
you should make it to where naruto, sasuke, and ino are on the same team.
Joker's Apprentince chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
ok a few pointers

1) spelling, i'm going to be lenient with this one cuz it's a fanfic and i also have bad spelling

2)though you have given the antagonist of the story how does it all mesh together

3)seriously not every new sentence needs to be a new paragraph

so far that's all i got
Dark Insomniacs chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Good start I really like the concept what will the pairings be? Update soon.
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
LOVE it, and I hope to see where you plan to go soon! W