|Reviews for Bonded|
| A concerned read chapter 6 . 11/8/2013
This should be M, it's fucking rape
| EasilyDistracted chapter 35 . 10/17/2013
The unicorn named Apples.
Yep. That's what I'm taking away from the story.
Good story though.
| ob1292 chapter 35 . 9/21/2013
Great story. Good Job
| 123-321 chapter 35 . 8/30/2013
very well done
| Irony'sFriend chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
I love this story. It's one of those that I continuously go back to when I want some good Merthur.
| Virebax chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Wow, what a wonderful story! I love it. It's strangely compelling, intriguing. You managed to create a very peculiar atmosphere with some mystery, a strange sensuality. The slash works very well with this plot and twist. I can't help but be a little frustated because there are some things I would have liked to understand better, like the bond (how does it works exactly?), or the functionning of Uther's realm, or the relationships between knights and sorcerers, or the fate of the children... I think, in the beginning it's logical to understand as little as Merlin, but I wish that things were made clearer later with the story unfurling.
Don't mistake me, I couldn't stop reading once I began and I favorited it. I supposed I would have liked it to be even longer.. You have a gift to create interesting stories, intriguing situations and complex relationships.
| LinBates chapter 35 . 5/8/2013
Wonderful AU story! I lived it.
The following concern the structure of your story, how it reads verses the concept. Correcting these things will only make your story better & more enjoyable to read.
I do suggest you reframe from using 'had' before your verbs, it is not needed and it makes your story passive instead of active. Also please read back over what you wrote before posting as I found several places where you used the wrong word such as using 'went' when it should have 'when' instead or 'and' instead of 'an.' If you are unsure about which word is correct, look it up in a dictionary to find out if it's the correct word or not. When the reader has to stop and figure out which word you meant, it breaks the flow of the story and takes away some of the pleasure of the story.
But never fear it was an enjoyable story, even though I personally can never see Merlin & Arther as a couple. Best friends, comrades and confidants yes, but never lovers! But even so I did enjoy the story and marked it as a favorite.
| Kiki1770 chapter 35 . 2/20/2013
Okay...well it was an interesting story, some parts were extremely twisted, and well...the story was FULL of extremes, to name a few would Arthur killing Uther, the bonding process involving kissing, Balinore and Morgana, Arthur's extreme personality and Merlin staying weak as he is through out the whole story. But hey, who am I to complain if I choose to read the whole story?
| Kiki1770 chapter 32 . 2/20/2013
Balinore and Morgana...no offense but that is fudging twisted. The man is twice her age and has a son that is her age.
| Kiki1770 chapter 13 . 2/19/2013
Well the summary says some slash, but I think this is definitely slash. Might want to change that :)
Love the story idea, I'm definitely reading till the end
| TruffleHead chapter 35 . 2/7/2013
OH MY GOODNESS, WHAT WILL I DO WITH MY LIFE NOW?
Wonderful, wonderful writing- it took me four days to read, but IT WAS TOTALLY WORTH IT.
Who needs sleep anyway... when you have ADORABLE MERTHUR TO READ! *squeal of delight*
Sorry for the caps lock. ;) I get that way when I'm excited.
| Grizzo chapter 35 . 12/31/2012
Absolutely the most perfect ending...thx...gr
| rowsdowersavesus chapter 35 . 12/31/2012
This story was bloody brilliant, as per usual, just wonderful!
| Zedabbler chapter 35 . 12/11/2012
It's a really really good epic!
And now I have to go prepare myself to go to school. I wish I could have 'lived' inside this story awhile longer, but alas...all good things must come to an end.
Thank you for writing this!
| allieb13 chapter 35 . 12/10/2012
I love this story to death! I have been searching for some well written Merlin fanfiction and this is one of them! This story is funny and poignant and I love it! P.S. I love that the unicorn's name is Apples!