Reviews for Getting It Right |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story have read it about 3 times over. Hope you don't abandon this and continue it it has the ability to be the best story on this site if you continue it. Hope to see an update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry for being crude but shit is so getting serious... I'm really glad that Ichigo reconciled with his parents, because I don't think he would have survived without his family in the end... any way I really hope ichigo just didnt complicate thins for himself with SS, by lashing out on Aizen like that... I really really hope that. Because I would just hate, for him to have to deal with the Gotei 13 pissed off at him, after Aizen is revealed... if he gets revealed at all... and if he kills Aizen, without him (A) revealing himself, well that will practically screw all of his (I's) efforts up so far. Otherwise I really love this fic, because it is brilliant :) and I am willing to wait for it for a really long time. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really awesome plot! This story caught my attention so much, good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was a great chapter! Now we're on the Orihime getting her own Soul Reaper Powers, and then the charge to the SS! Great going, I'm really loving this! Selenay |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The story is awesome and i cant wait to see the fights coming up hope you upload soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh man oh man oh man. part of me hates you for letting aizen live. but another part is salivating for the rest of the undoubtedly amazing plot you have planned. because, let's face it, killing aizen that soon...well, what would be the point, eh? anxiously awaiting the next chapter! ~Ria |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okkaayyyy, sooooooo...ahem...Just because I'm a completely anal detail-oriented Japanese obsessed geek, I felt obligated to review this particular chapter... Right, so, I just wanted to comment on the 'kimono' thing and clarify the scene. First, I'm surprised you're having Orihime buy an actual kimono and not a summer yukata which is the normal wear for a festival like Tanabata. Is this intentional? Or is it just a mix-up of the meaning of the words kimono and yukata? I don't want to assume anything, here, so I don't want to sound like I'm lecturing or anything, I just happen to know quite a bit about formal Japanese wear and it's something I'm interested in, so I tend to obsess about those kinds of details. I know they're not critical to the plot, but, heh, humour me? Anyway, you said they went to a boutique, but then you said designer. It strikes me that it can't be both...because either it's a boutique with second-hand kimonos costing a reasonable price (and when I say reasonable I still mean extortionate...;; or damn, but i'd own a BUNCH already) or it's selling high quality kimonos which I really really doubt because those cost thousands of dollars... Anyway, like I said, it's not really integral to the plot the cost of what she's buying. Although I do have to protest a little about Orihime being able to put on a kimono by herself. That would be impossible. No way would she know how to put on a kimono when most women have to hire people to come put them on FOR them...even a yukata with just one layer is hard because tying the obi by yourself is tough and would still take you at least like 15 minutes to put on. If it was more than one layer, it would be like 20 minutes by yourself. And if it was a kimono, those things take ages to get on! Aaaaanyway, I'm totally going off on a spiel here. Sorry! The more I think about it the more I think you guys probably meant she's buying a nice summer yukata which would probably set her back about 80 to 100 dollars or so. Maybe more if it's a really nice one with all the pieces included. But yeah, I really don't want to assume so I'd love it if you wouldn't mind dropping a line about it. Or even just to tell me to mind my own business... . Okay, gotta get back to reading the story...I have to say that I wasn't holding out too much hope when I started reading at first simply because I've been disappointed before by 'time-travel' or 'alternate-dimension travel' bleach stories...but wow, you guys totally blew my mind. It's so...poignant and beautifully written. Everything that happens in the plot seems totally believable (er, except the kimono thing, sorry! okay, nitpicking, must stop...) and the characterisation is superb. And don't tell anyone, but the part where Ichigo is kicked out of his house and gets all depressed? I totally teared up and nearly cried. A story's gotta be pretty damn amazing to make me do that. So I can only hope that you're gonna update it again, and soon! And that the next chapter's not going to end on a cliffhanger...or you'll probably get another pathetic review, begging for more... Oh, and this fic has totally sold me on Ichihime romance. usually I don't care either way, but this fic? Oh yeah, I'm now all about Ichihime. Ichihime FTW! *pumps fist* Anyway I can definitely say this is going to be one of those very few fics I'm going to want to read again and again. I have a small list of those that I keep on the back-burner for whenever I need something REALLY good to read and can't find anything new. XD Congrats for making that list! Ok, off to read more! Thanks for putting up with my anal-obsessiveness! ~Ria |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Any chance you guys'll be updating this story in the NEAR future? It's a great story and lot of fun to read. It'd be shame to leave it to die a miserable death off in a dusty corner. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is GOOOOD! Interesting and seems promising. Please update soooon! :))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU NEED TO UPDATE! I HAVE BEEN WAITING AND WAITING AND WAITING! PLEASE UPDATE! Or I will die! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. Misspelled words aside, this has been an excellent story. I'm looking forward to seeing Ichigo invade Soul Society again with his increased power, and I'm especially looking forward to seeing Ichigo tear Aizen apart. |
![]() ![]() ![]() outline of the last chapter please if your not going to continue |