Reviews for Getting It Right
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 11 . 5/6/2020
That was emotional
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 10 . 5/6/2020
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uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 9 . 5/6/2020
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uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 8 . 5/6/2020
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uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 7 . 5/6/2020
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uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 6 . 5/6/2020
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uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 4 . 5/6/2020
goo ood
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 3 . 5/6/2020
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uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 2 . 5/6/2020
oh he devious
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 1 . 5/6/2020
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Ffreader1000 chapter 1 . 1/25/2020
Really hope you finish this. It’s such a great story!
corjca1 chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
nice pairing my arse dirty ugly retarded onumi the pig face whore koursaki kun get fucking real shite story i hope ichigow dies in this story
Skyreal chapter 16 . 12/12/2019
I remember reading this story several years ago when it was still being written and it only had 9 chapters. I'm glad to see it got many more chapters, but sad that it never quite reached completion. Regardless, well done to writing a compelling story: the glimpses into how Ichigo's friends all perished and the traumatic effect that has had on his psyche brings a whole new level of depth to Ichigo's character, which is beautifully contrasted with this Orihime's spirit and will to protect everything.
My only gripe is that I think the hollow gets too much plot relevance in this story and that I don't think he should be causing Ichigo so many problems, though you could argue that the trauma has made Ichigo more susceptible to violent outbreaks? But even then it seems the hollow gets way too much time to make his opinion known and it gets kind of old: that you have to devote so many words to rehash the point over and over that Ichigo has to keep fighting off the hollow. Perhaps you want to just show how much of an effect the hollow has on Ichigo in this dimension, but honestly you could probably get that same message across without adding a page or two to each chapter to showing how the hollow is evil and just timing the events where the hollow comes in more effectively.

Hope that was a helpful critique if you ever come back around to read reviews on this story: I sincerely wish you could finish this story, but understand if it's not really on your bucket list anymore.
thestormwriter123 chapter 16 . 7/31/2019
Amazing story, just wish it hadn't ended up dead. The idea was a really nice once too, and orihimes and ichigos different characters were really enjoying to read. Hope you can continue this somehow, even though I know it's unlikely . Best of luck
Guest chapter 14 . 6/5/2019
wouldn't say number one, but prob fairly high
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